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Six Sentence Story -the Wakefield Doctrine- Part 2

Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)

This is the Wakefield Doctrine’s contribution to the Six Sentence Story bloghop.

Hosted by Denise, governed by the Lord High Sextuplet, (aka ‘the God of as many arms as fingers…sorta’), all are invited to participate.

Note: this is Part 2 of a serial Six, to establish a modicum of narrative context, go ahead and follow this link to Part 1

Prompt word:

POWER

The night grew darker, the wind stronger and the grey-green avalanche of the following sea grew bolder; like a 7th grade bully, in thrall of early-onset adolescence, the waves, stalking the boat as it ran for port, hungered for the opportunity to prove that might made right.

Perched uncomfortably on the edge of the duct tape-patched helmsman’s chair, the newest deckhand vainly sought to anticipate the behavior of the Eastern-rigged trawler as it rode up the front of the closed arcs of waves pushed by the wind; recalling movies and youtube videos of stormy seas, the young man felt the visceral punch of image-versus-reality stronger even than his first time lying next to a naked woman.

The boat, synonymous with ‘the world’, (which in turn, through the alchemy of extreme fear was now shorthand for ‘Life’), rolled in the trough of a wave that never even slowed down to see if the trawler had capsized.

His first sense of the precarious relationship that pretended to exist in balance between the ambitions of Man and the raw power of Nature, bloomed like a nightmare orchid as he felt the wood and iron boat rise and accelerate.

Being lifted by a wave is different than being lifted while standing in an elevator; the ocean was a fluid and therefore free of the constraints imposed by the straight line vectors and ninety-degree angles so in abundance on dry land; ‘Up’ could be at the end of a spiral, and, well, ‘Down’ was only some point not up, the path of the fishing boat was as unhindered and freeform as a refrigerator door finger painting.

Survival of a race is often a binary sequence involving chance, continuation of an individual is where the traces of divinity are to be found; as the newest deckhand decided that power was a verb, one could be forgiven for believing the fruit of a certain Garden was not Knowledge of Good and Evil, rather it was the reality-transcending power of Metaphor; laughing at the dark world, the young man made the fishing trawler a surfboard and rode the waves to home.

 

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Well, what exactly do you want to know? Whether I am a clark or a scott or roger? If you have to ask, then you need to keep reading the Posts for two reasons: a)to get a clear enough understanding to be able to make the determination of which type I am and 2) to realize that by definition I am all three.* *which is true for you as well, all three...but mostly one

Comments

  1. Spira says:

    #1 to #5, all weathered-patina worthy of a master Weaver’s oeuvre.
    And then comes #6, the laser guided munition… a reality- bunker-buster.
    If one thing of yours deserves capital letter, that is your Metaphor.

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      thanks, man

      (don’t tell anyone, but the action sequence was based on my first trip out of Galilee* One of my favorite fishing stories)

      * no, not that one… the fishing port in southern New England lol

  2. phyllis says:

    Perfect description of the emotions of life – thank you.

  3. Frank Hubeny says:

    Nice phrase: “hungered for the opportunity to prove that might made right”. Another good point: “‘Up’ could be at the end of a spiral, and, well, ‘Down’ was only some point not up,” I hope that surfboard of a fishing trawler finds its way home.

  4. Excellent Part 2, Clark. I stand with Nick. Your talent for metaphor allows this scene to come alive with fervent? impact.
    I am most partial to #4, specifically “…bloomed like a nightmare orchid…” Nice.
    Of course, “the young man made the fishing trawler a surfboard and rode the waves to home.” Would expect nothing less from him.

  5. messymimi says:

    Reality is all in how you perceive it, right?

  6. Chris Hall says:

    Beautiful done!🏄‍♂️

  7. Metaphorical magnificence, even if I did feel somewhat queasy whilst reading it!

  8. I’m glad he found his way with the water. I was right there, and wishing I wasn’t, don’t like to be out there when it’s that rough. Meaning, well done, Sir.

  9. ren says:

    cool!

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