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Six Sentence Story -the Wakefield Doctrine-

Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)

the part of the boat where the name ‘Roann’ is? that’s the fo’c’s’le (sleep and eat there…work everywhere else)

 

This is the Wakefield Doctrine’s contribution to the Six Sentence Story bloghop.

Hosted by Denise.

Prompt word:

MILK

“Keep us on this heading; I’ll relieve you at four,” not waiting for agreement, argument or even acknowledgement, the owner of  F/V Christine Denise opened the port-side wheelhouse door, stepped down to the mercury-vapor lit deck of the trawler and made his way forward to the fo’c’sle and his bunk; leaning back against the pedestal chair, the newest deckhand looked down at the compass, it’s ordinal-point disc floating in fluid and indirect red light; outside the windows, the sea was biding it’s time as the young man who paid for his intelligence with the coin of easy boredom had already fled the scene, retreating to the recent past.

 

Milt’s Tavern was everything a bar in a working port might hope to be: no windows, one clock on the wall, (a brass ship’s clock that reminded the patrons of their responsibilities eight bells at a time), and a tolerance for desperation; having stowed his seabag onboard the Christine Denise, the young man walked down the dark and aromatic docks to kill an hour with the bar’s new owner; the place was fairly empty, as most of the fleet had departed for Georges Bank earlier in the day.

The bartender smiled at the young man and the empty stool in front of his station, “Bound on the evening tide, are we, Mr. Selkirk,” the new deckhand laughed as he sat, ” You know, with that accent of yours I’m surprised you didn’t rename this place, ‘Paradise’s Cost’; folding the white bar rag, the owner smiled, ‘Better to serve in a bar than to rule in a retirement home?”

“Yeah, only got an hour, better make that my usual,” the barkeep busied himself behind and below the expanse of burnished teak, an expression of hard-earned serenity creasing the corners of his eyes: with the flourish of a stage magician, he placed on the shining wood, a glass of milk and, adjacent to it, a china saucer holding three Oreos; glancing over the white crescent of frothy-cold milk, the young man, in a mumble serving to highlight his desperate attempt to sound casual asked, “So, Keith, is Reena working tonight?”

 

The newest deckhand, standing second watch, learned one of the oldest lessons of working on the sea: no matter how dire the circumstances might seem to the waking, alert and alarmed mind, a sufficiently exhausted body is capable of taking hostage all senses except balance and so, standing at the wheel, the man jerked forward suddenly awake and alert.

 

 

 

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Well, what exactly do you want to know? Whether I am a clark or a scott or roger? If you have to ask, then you need to keep reading the Posts for two reasons: a)to get a clear enough understanding to be able to make the determination of which type I am and 2) to realize that by definition I am all three.* *which is true for you as well, all three...but mostly one

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  1. Haven’t heard ‘George’s Bank’ in a sentence lately. Ye know yer fishin spots, aye?
    Yet there be more than catching fish on this young adventurer’s mind. What would the sea be without a port? Eternal Hell, I tell ya.
    Good one, Sirs, though I feel I haven’t totally cod up with this story.

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      arrr

      I love the source experience for this (along with other Sixes coming up) all the more now that I have the luxury of survival and the (illusion) of control

  2. Frank Hubeny says:

    Nice line: ‘Better to serve in a bar than to rule in a retirement home?” And another nice line: ” the waking, alert and alarmed mind”

  3. Chris Hall says:

    Whale ahoy! 🐳(perhaps)

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      you know, I don’t believe I’ve ever seen a whale, in the wild, up here (coast of Northeast America)

  4. As an amateur sailor and a professional bartender, I lived every moment of your tale.

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      cool

      (not sure what has prompted this recent quirk in my Sixes… not that there is a shortage of characters, but there is something to the notion that, from a certain perspective* everyone is a character in a story. The community of writers that have gathered around Denise’s bloghop are innately interesting if for no other reason than I (for one) would have zero chance of meeting any of us in the ‘real’ world. Add in the nature of the context we do meet (and interact and develop relationships) this virtual world and surely the impulse to incorporate people into stories is understandable….

      aww damn! wait a minute!! Am I guilty of writing fan fiction?!?@?!
      (I have no reason to disparage fan fiction and would attribute my opprobrium to the time I’ve spend searching online for a literary agent who almost always say No fan fiction!)

      *not necessarily the inevitable result of mind-altering substances

  5. “…the barkeep busied himself behind and below the expanse of burnished teak, an expression of hard-earned serenity creasing the corners of his eyes..”

    Poignant line, Clark.

    Talk about a few brief moments walking sleep’s unconscious.

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