Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)
This is the Doctrine’s contribution to the Six Sentence Story bloghop.
Hosted by Denise, constrained by a sentence limit (high and low) of six, there are worse ways to spend the remaining time you have on earth.
(Language Advisory. ….’cause, well, Rosetta!)
Prompt word:
FOIL
“motherfucker!”
“Go bhfaighir bás gan an sagart” *
“whoa that was truly some bad shit…”
“if there is a god, she had better have a good reason oww“The multilingual cacophony filling the room sent me back to my first arena concert. Released from my restraints, though still in the formal living room of a vacant house, I recalled, with fondness, the hour or so of Marshall amplifier-induced deafness that followed me home that night.
I smiled at the sight of Anya Clarieaux giving orders to the Hostage Rescue Team in her preferred language: ‘Do what I say-ese’. She caught me watching, of course, but I still savored the brief reminder that, despite having foiled an attempt to kidnap us, she wasn’t superhuman.
Waving the man away, Anya threw me a ‘what else would you expect‘ shrug, followed by five seconds of direct eye contact; almost immediately, with a mere finger-circling motion towards my shouting companions, she made me responsible for them.
* “I hope you die without a priest”.



Nice how Anya’s preferred language is “Do what I say-ese”.
lol that’s a good assessment
Superb. I must remember that stinging phrase.
it is a fun one
Gosh, my word. This is getting even more interesting…
ikr?
At least they are not still held hostage, but now comes the interesting part, figuring out what happened and why.
yeah the trail will surely lead back to one Mr. Loreto (in Miami)
Surely, Ian has moments of “damn, wish I’d never met Anya Clarieaux”… but this is not one of those moments.
I think Anya is cool. Maybe not someone I would personally like to know but definitely someone I enjoy as a character in your story.
She made YOU responsible? Not fair…but what can you do?
lol wait, but no! I’m but a pre-fictional construct (a backstory with internet access)… Ian Devereaux now, he’s the guy. Thing about Ian is that he survived working with Anya on a previous occasion (or two)….