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Six Sentence Story -the Wakefield Doctrine- [a Sybil Trainor Six]

Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)

This is the Wakefield Doctrine’s contribution to the Six Sentence Story bloghop.

Denise is the host.

Following is the next installment in the (serialized) ‘backstory’ of Sybil Trainor, the newest character from the Six Sentence Café & Bistro oeuvre. (For you Readers what like the sense of story continuity, previously on ‘a Sybil Trainor Six’.)

This week’s prompt word is:

PASTE

“You ain’t from around here, are you,” the bar stool holding Sybil turned a half revolution to her right, the voice was from a man wearing a stained and slightly wrinkled work-shirt with the casual pride of physician’s scrubs; his beard, just the wrong side of comfortable removed all doubt to his intentions or standards for social interaction.

“I’d guess it was either my perfume or the lack of double negatives,” Sybil noted the tightening of eyebrows, a bull disturbed in a quiet pasture; Steve, according to the red embroidery on his shirt, stopped her rotation with his knee, hand on his beer bottle moving to her hip.

The mute negotiations of fox-hole prayers and last call in bars that advertise ‘Ladies drink half-price’ concluded with Sybil standing first, the man’s jawed tightened, forced to react even as the young woman whispered,

“So, Steve, I spotted a motel just outside the Murphysboro city limits that looked like it catered to the impromptu honeymoon trade,” his country-boy smile, more a torch dropped in an abyss than a lighting of a shared candle, now pasted on his face, “But left my car at the commuter parking up at the interstate, so give me the keys to your truck.”

 

 

Standing at the foot of the bed, open blouse more vestment than daywear, Sybil smiled down at the man struggling weakly, arms and legs reduced to twitches of impotent panic; “You remember, back in the day, the mainstream media was beside itself with girls getting slipped a roofie and all sorts of unpleasantness ensuing?”

Steve, motor control limited to widening his eyes like a rabbit to the wolf, a blue flush growing as hypoxia tightened it’s grip,

“Not that it matters, but your next of kin will find the keys to your truck right there in the ignition just as fine as can be, probably help with the funeral expenses; been fun, gotta run, if you see him down there, tell Uncle Fred hi for me.”

After a brief ride from a cautiously amused trucker, Sybil Trainor started her car, tuned in the closest thing to a college radio station and pulled onto Highway 13; her journey towards a new life resuming by way of the path of Great Tri-State tornado; Radcliffe could wait a few extra days as college freshman-to-be continued to back-burn the remnants of childhood.

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Well, what exactly do you want to know? Whether I am a clark or a scott or roger? If you have to ask, then you need to keep reading the Posts for two reasons: a)to get a clear enough understanding to be able to make the determination of which type I am and 2) to realize that by definition I am all three.* *which is true for you as well, all three...but mostly one

Comments

  1. phyllis says:

    Your female characters have a propensity to kill their men.
    I liked the music also.
    Thank you.

    • messymimi says:

      Murder most foul. She is scary but no one is past redeeming.

      • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

        she is interesting (my effort to create a less charming antagonist than usual)*

        * villainesses in previous efforts tend to have a good/interesting/redeeming qualities that diminish their bad qualities

  2. Well done, sir. Disturbing in that quiet way that makes your skin kinda crawl.

  3. dyannedillon says:

    Ahh, another killer among us!

    ps huge fan of The Civil Wars and was devastated when they broke up

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      yeah, this Sibyl is proving to be a surprising (and, I trust, interesting) character

  4. Oooh, that twist in the middle… Nicely written, Clark.