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Six Sentence Story -the Wakefield Doctrine-

Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)

This is the Six Sentence Story

Denise is the host.

Prompt word:

EDGE

“Go on wid yer now, we’re not payin’ the likes of you to lay about on the grass, counting the clouds!”

Trevor McAleister, remembering his doctor’s mild scolding during his last visit to hospital, ‘Blood pressure, Trevor, it’ll be the death of you’, counted to ten.

“Your mate, the fella with the odd name… Scottish bloke I reckon, what was ‘is name now?”

Taking off his cap, Trevor looked towards the front yard of his newest client’s house, a modest cottage on Church Lane in Girton, felt renewed determination to maintain his calm, continued, “Seasaw … no, Cedric… no, nothing so high class… Ceayr! Blimey, that was it!”

“Find your pally and finish up here, we have three more houses to do before dark,” reaching the front gate he turned and called back to his worker, “An don’t forget, after you two finish mowing the grass, you have to trim the ‘edge.”

 

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Well, what exactly do you want to know? Whether I am a clark or a scott or roger? If you have to ask, then you need to keep reading the Posts for two reasons: a)to get a clear enough understanding to be able to make the determination of which type I am and 2) to realize that by definition I am all three.* *which is true for you as well, all three...but mostly one

Comments

  1. Reena Saxena says:

    Makes me curious on what happens before or after this ‘slice of life’…

  2. Spira says:

    Oh, that’s the reason of the nocturnal cramps!

  3. Tom says:

    Nice how you squeezed ‘edge’ in right at the edge there, Clark!

  4. ceayr says:

    Come to think of it, Clark, you didn’t pay me for that job, and after I travelled all the way down to darkest Englandshire

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      lol… you mean outside Worschester-by-Ham-on-Rye, in the Low Highlands?
      those people have funny names for places (this from a person who lives near a coastal community named, Quonochontaug)

  5. Chris Hall says:

    I liked the introduction of the ‘Scottish bloke’ but best of all is that final line! LOL

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      yeah this was one of those Six that we reverse-written… once I have the English pronunciation in my head.

  6. Frank Hubeny says:

    Nice description of the boss in spite of his blood pressure trying to motivate the lawn crew.

  7. UP says:

    twofers?

  8. Now I get the reference to the wee Scottish chappie elsewhere. Fun Six, clark. :-)

  9. jenne49 says:

    That made me smile.
    And i do like the trimming of the ‘edge.
    Nice touch.

  10. Liz H says:

    You guys! A little bit of trouble, but an awful lot of fun!