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Sixty Sentence Story -the Wakefield Doctrine-

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Denise has, once again, opened the doors to the prompt-word corral and asks us to write, if we please, a wee story, a Six Sentence Story.

You can do that, right?

Of course, you can.

Lets start.

The word:

Finish

“No, let me go!” the young woman stepped out of reach, but not without including a seemingly spontaneous fouetté, the lacy wings of her scarf whipping the young man’s face.

As a beast of burden trapped between the lash and the yoke would be unsurprised to observe, this caused him to reach over the music rack, with its half-filled sheets of parchment manuscript, towards her, “Liebchen, I have three-quarters of… ”

“I am quite aware of your Schwammerl, and tempting it is, if you do not earn a decent dowry, mein vater will never permit us to marry; must I lock you in your studio?” The woman backed towards the door of the studio, her smile encouraging, yet in the depths of her dark eyes, a question hid like trapdoor spider at the bottom of a depression in the sand.

“Ach, Therese, you are so correct…though this melody enchants me, the fine people of Vienna would not look kindly on a symphony of only two movements,” the young man’s hands, inert on the ivory and ebony keys, overwrought iron awaiting the blacksmith’s pounding.

Pausing in her retreat, she let the ends of her scarf drape his shoulders, a betrothal veil on the non-traditional half an engaged couple and whispered, “Finish it, Franz!”

 

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Well, what exactly do you want to know? Whether I am a clark or a scott or roger? If you have to ask, then you need to keep reading the Posts for two reasons: a)to get a clear enough understanding to be able to make the determination of which type I am and 2) to realize that by definition I am all three.* *which is true for you as well, all three...but mostly one

Comments

  1. UP says:

    the young man’s hands, inert on the ivory and ebony keys, overwrought iron awaiting the blacksmith’s pounding.EVERY DAMN WEEK MAN! EVERY DAMN WEEK!
    Those musicians were randy!

    http://www.rednecklatte.com/the-piano-wasnt-the-only-things-he-played/

  2. Schone geschichte, mein bruder.

  3. Phyllis says:

    A real mystery. If he did not finish, did they not get married?

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      No, no he did not.

      (It seems like he spent most of his life on friend’s living room sofas and spare bedrooms.

  4. Sehr Gut!

  5. From running nuns to incomplete composers, such a range you pen.
    Cool take.