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Six Sentence Story -the Wakefield Doctrine- [‘…of Heroes and the Misunderstood’ a Rue DeNite Serial Six]

Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)

This is the Doctrine’s contribution to the Six Sentence Story bloghop.

Hosted by Denise (insisting only on the number of sentences be Six). No more. No less.

Back in May of last year, Tom, (The Mansionic Perspective) he comes up and says, ‘Hey clark,” he says, “I’m thinking my bunch of superheroes might have an interest in some of them characters what frequent the Bottom of the Sea Strip Club and Lounge.” The beginning of the Doctrine’s contribution to the serial mashup can be read: Here

Well, our friend (and chef at the Six Sentence Cafe and Bistro) is at it again. Last week he wrote a Six that took place at Rue DeNite’s house. Totally un-expected. (Thanks! FrankMimi!)

Previously on (as yet named)… Serial Six we find Moonbeam feeling surprised

 

Prompt Word:

HEART

“Shit! Turn the car around.”

Like luminescent dominoes, the halogen street lights illuminated both speaker and driver through the car’s moonroof;  the driver was male, (Exhibit 1: early-stage male pattern baldness), confident, (Exhibit 2: right-hand on the wheel, left-elbow on armrest) and possessed of a certain serenity: (Exhibit 3: an easy smile of affectionate curiosity despite the volume/intensity from his passenger); who, with the additional  light from oncoming traffic, was unabashedly female, (Exhibit 4: eclipse-dark shadows rising and falling across her upper chest), athletic, (Exhibit 5: in an activity not so much focused on defying gravity as it was conspiring with it, i.e. willowy yet providing her provocative clothing with every parry and feint considered important to women’s fashion designers) and possessed of an intellect that searched for traps even as she baited her own, (Exhibit 6: shaded by her short, blue-veined blonde hair were two tattoos, below her right ear: Non serviam and, starting beneath her left ear trailing downwards: Vincit quae se vincit.)

The neighborhood was as quiet as a non-gated community gets, the architecture was tasteful, every house had three car garages and sited a discrete distance from the street, a taste not a meal, in terms of privacy; Rocco pulled the black-on-black DB12 into the driveway nearest the front entrance.

“I’ll be right back,” Rue’s shadow flowed across the front of the garage door, slowing as she approached the half-open front door; a glance back at the car confirmed that her friend had not abandoned his side gig as her bodyguard as he turned up the car’s sound system, letting Jacques Loussier’s jazz-Bach mask any sound of approach and eased out of the drivers side, siccing his own silhouette on hers.

“Well, far be it for me to forget a superhero,” stepping over the threshold into the living room, Rue DeNite smiled, “Oh wait, this isn’t one of those ambush reality shows, where they hide video cameras hoping to catch the homeowner doing the horizontal mambo with the hot neighbor, or in this case, maybe just sending a burglar in tights off to the ER.”

Ignoring the young woman with the rifle, Rue waited until Rocco closed the door and turned to the strange man in her living room, “Good Golly Mr. Moonbeam, who’s your cute little friend with all the weaponry; I gotta tell you, this supervillain action is turning my thermostat way up, poor Rocco’s heart might not be up to the demands I expect to be putting on him once we get back to our vacation, you hear what I’m sayin?”

 

 

 

 

 

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Well, what exactly do you want to know? Whether I am a clark or a scott or roger? If you have to ask, then you need to keep reading the Posts for two reasons: a)to get a clear enough understanding to be able to make the determination of which type I am and 2) to realize that by definition I am all three.* *which is true for you as well, all three...but mostly one

Comments

  1. Love the 2nd sentence, all graphicy novelly and all. How to provide total visual. Damn. (you be giving me tattoo ideas there, lol)
    Great seeing Rue and Rocco…wait! “Mashup”?! Bring it C and T!

  2. She went on in with the front door already open? She’s one calm cool and collected woman, methinks she will prevail. Well paced throughout, from the luminescent domino street lights to the tough talk confrontation, was like watching a movie.

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      yeah, Rue has that ‘survivial instincts much?’ about her

      thanks, some are Tarantine-wannabe others, art house, Lynch-ettes

  3. phyllis says:

    Nice and steamy six – thank you.

  4. Frank Hubeny says:

    Nice description of the female in Exhibit 5: “possessed of an intellect that searched for traps even as she baited her own”

  5. messymimi says:

    Excellent all around!

  6. Chris Hall says:

    The story, the lights and the music. All those wonderful people, both the real ones and fictional ones too.

  7. Tom says:

    Excellent start, Clark. As Denise says, very off the panel graphic novel. I love it!

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      ty, T

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      yeah. agree
      one thing… title
      maybe, like on the next installment we ask the Readers (like a contest) Name that Serial Six? Or, even wait a few more episodes so that can get an idea of the nature of this thing (I’m curious too)

  8. Liz H-H says:

    Love the reveal by flashy dark and light…sets vfc the pace as the images roll out, like the sound of a vintage film projector.

  9. That second sentence was so creatively written – I loved all of the exhibits in it. Brilliant!

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      thanks, Nicole (finally a use for those images we all get in the everyday parts of life)