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One-K Friday -the Wakefield Doctrine-

Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)

 

Once again, we rejoin our friends jenne and ceayr for a go at finding the most important 250 words hidden in la fotografía.

If’n you like wordage and fun, you owe it to yourself to head over to the très avant-gardiste bloghop, the Unicorn Challenge. (Tell ’em, ‘the Doctrine sent ya’)

“That’s strange,” Anton Rilke pushed back from his new desk, which given his considerable girth was more than a slight adjustment from the monitor. The new head of Interpol’s Human-trafficking, Drug-interdiction and War crimes bureau, made reaching out to the police departments in his jurisdiction a priority.

“What’s that Detective-Capitán?” Inspector-Jefe Carlos Delgado, eager to get a sense of the man, ignored the cultural and political barriers that impeded law enforcement in 21st Century Iberia.

“Your latest kidnapping,” the face of Inspector Delgado shrank to a thumbnail as a black purse, lying on the sidewalk at the top of a alley-staircase filled the screen, “I’ve a flag on the DNA your most fastidious patrolman collected on the scene.”

Appreciating the left-handed compliment, Carlos smiled, “What do you mean?”

“Although no help identifying the kidnappers, it links the owner of the purse and the young girl who went missing last month near this location are blood relatives, mother/daughter in fact.”

“Then you’re going to find our medical examiner’s report on the body of one of the two Alphonso brothers that was found floating in the harbor this morning most fascinating,” the detective paused as he watched Detective Rilke glance at what were surely other monitors on his desk, mutter something in German and raise a bushy-white eyebrow.

“Am I correct, Senor Delgado, there is a match between the DNA on the purse and a blood sample on the late, and apparently quite tortured, Nico Alphonso?”

 

 

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Well, what exactly do you want to know? Whether I am a clark or a scott or roger? If you have to ask, then you need to keep reading the Posts for two reasons: a)to get a clear enough understanding to be able to make the determination of which type I am and 2) to realize that by definition I am all three.* *which is true for you as well, all three...but mostly one

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  1. ceayr says:

    You are a cad, sir, and a bounder!
    You hit us with all these intriguing details, then leave us not only high but, not to put too fine a point on it, also dry.
    Excellent piece, if sadly incomplete.

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      lol
      Don’t tell anyone, but I was faced with a choice (Hobson’s or Sophie’s… can’t decide): either exceed the 250 word limit or try to convince the Readers that this was the beginning of a serial Unicorn
      Truth be told, I don’t have your (or some of the others) skills at ‘telling a story’* and completing it in 250 words.
      So rather than run over the word count I opted for the latter choice.
      (ed. now that is an interesting challenge. In the Six Sentence Story bloghop, where I developed whatever I might lay claim to in terms of writing serial stories (‘Serial Sixes), as long as I didn’t run our of semi-colons there was enough room to write. But there it was a prompt word. Here: prompt photo. Not quite as easy to backfit a prompt photo in an established story

      …mums the word

      *’telling a story’ in a prompt bloghop is evidence of a skill level higher, imo, than presenting a scene, small set-piece or vinaigrette

  2. Ah, the old Alphonso brothers trick, spotted instantly by that poet-detective, Rilke Smart. ;-)

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      The question (and the reason to believe this is the first installment of a serial ‘corn*) is: ‘How did the mother of the kidnapped girl find itself on the body of the dead Alphonso?’
      Depending on next week’s photo (well, more on my creativity) we may find out!

      * if there is such a thing

  3. jenne49 says:

    Foul deeds afoot, and you leave us guessing…
    Craftily done, Clark. I like stories that leave my imagination room to … well, to imagine!
    (PS I like how the name Rilke was slipped in there. One of my favourite writers.)

    • jenne49 says:

      PPS I actually thought it might be among the final chapters of a novel!

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      Thank you, j

      (as I mentioned in my Reply (and in today’s post) to ceayr, while not a deliberate effort to fail at the Unicorn Challenge this week, seeing how most people liked the ‘set-up’, I guess I’ll just have to try and continue whatever story it was I started.)

      actually, this approach has a long history in this blog… writing a post without planning, find myself in the middle of 400 words and try to write my way out of my (rhetorical) corner.

      wish us luck

      lol

  4. Ah yes, Clark. I see what you mean. Serendipitous but just to a point. Whereas the denouement in mine is clear, yours is still somewhat shrouded in mystery.
    Engaging.

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      therein lies your success and my failure*

      well, there is that advice about goals and grasps

      lol

      *in our response to jenne and ceayr’s challenge to write a story ‘keying off’ a photo and bringing it in under 250 words

  5. messymimi says:

    A good writer always leaves us hoping for more.

  6. Reena Saxena says:

    Awaiting more…

  7. Tom says:

    I like these little snippets of stories, Clark and I think it’s good to leave the reader wanting more!
    You could try a Six Sentence Unicorn Challenge… use the prompt word and photo together with six sentences and 250 words! Hehehe! Just saying… 🙂

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      …that has a certain appeal (Damn! We never lose our childhood/school days. “Now, Mr. Clark If your friend Tom told you to jump off the Brooklyn Bridge would you do that as well?”)

  8. A new mystery/crime to solve by the estimable Herr Rilke. And, it appears, with a new character! I look forward to Inspector-Jefe Carlos Delgado’s “contribution”.
    “quite tortured”. Surely, a polite way to imply a most gruesome crime. Let the crime solving begin!

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      I may not be able to use Inspector Delgado in the current Serial Sixes, but def in the future.

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