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Six Sentence Story -the Wakefield Doctrine- [an Ian Devereaux Six]

Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)

This is the Wakefield Doctrine’s contribution to the Six Sentence Story bloghop.

Hosted by Denise, ruled by a single… rule? To use the prompt word and keep it to six sentences in length.

This week’s prompt word:

SCREEN

“Ya got the instinct, I’ll give you that.”

Lou Ceasare spoke quietly, which is to say the regulars presently in attendance at the Bottom of the Sea Strip Club and Lounge, in a demonstration of the social phenomenon 0f  Interpersonal Entrainment, simultaneously increased the volume of their voices, effectively drowning the conversation going on in the last booth on the Lounge side where he and I sat.

Staree Nyte, currently playing tag with a multi-colored baby-spot light around the stage in the Strip Club, with the seamless transition exhibited by the patrons of the Lounge side, switched her musical accompaniment from ‘California Girls’ by the Beach Boys, it’s laid-back rhythm eminently danceable, to the more ‘Hey, the show’s over here’ of Bob Seger’s ‘Her Strut’; what two men in a booth?

Lou and I could’ve been at a corner table in the Tavern on the Green for the sense of having a relaxed, private conversation over lunch, except for the part about being in Providence, sitting in a red-leather booth opposite one of the most respected (and feared) men in the New England underworld; oh yeah, the topic was how I might be helpful.

“You wouldn’t know it look at me now, Devereaux, but there was a time back when I got into the life that all I had were my instincts and, what do they call it now, a knack for psycho-social evaluation and screening,” He laughed his alpha-wolf laugh resulting in a pause in the susurrus of conversations surrounding us, every bit the primordial freeze of creatures large and small whenever a top-tier predator reminds the surrounding jungle of their presence, “Well, back then Captain Kangaroo and Mister Rogers already carved out the kiddie TV territory, what’s a young Italian-American boy gonna do?”

The privacy-curtain provided by everyone in the place came back as Lou leaned over the table towards me, something like those slow-motion videos of pieces of the Antarctic the size of a state breaking off into the ocean, “I need you to look into the background of a potential… ‘business partner’ for me, all on the up and up, of course; ‘cept my name never gets more involved than whatever my latest escapades might be in the Providence Journal, capiche?”

 

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Well, what exactly do you want to know? Whether I am a clark or a scott or roger? If you have to ask, then you need to keep reading the Posts for two reasons: a)to get a clear enough understanding to be able to make the determination of which type I am and 2) to realize that by definition I am all three.* *which is true for you as well, all three...but mostly one

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  1. phyllis says:

    gotta love Lou
    “You wouldn’t know it look at me now, Devereaux, but there was a time back when I got into the life that all I had were my instincts and, what do they call it now, a knack for psycho-social evaluation and screening,”
    Thank you

  2. messymimi says:

    He has a knack, and if you don’t upset him (which i’d never intentionally do), he grows on you.

  3. Frank Hubeny says:

    It could be worse. Lou may have insisted it not be “on the up and up”.

  4. A matter of interpretation “on the up and up”, eh? lol
    Interested to see the effects of Ian’s investigation on his and Lou’s friendship.

  5. I’m interested in learning more about this potential ‘business partner’. It was a good, engaging tale.

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      will be as well*

      * the bane/excitement of seat-of-the-pants approach to writing, no?

  6. Spira says:

    1.Abel Magwitch…!
    2. Lizzo Stayin’ Alive??? now, I know you are “spicing” your coffee! lol
    3. Lou ending with Capiche and Ian accepting…bring it on, Clark!
    4. No, I don’t write in bulletpoints, D…this is an hallucination from PPC’s coffee :)

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      lol

      thanks to your cogent observationing, there does seem to be something of peak (in energy levels) towards the end of the ‘work’ week

  7. I’m not sure I should have been listening in to this conversation!

  8. Chris Hall says:

    Good show!

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