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Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)

This is the Six Sentence Story bloghop.

It, (‘Six Sentence StoryA1), is our contribution to the larger set of posts that, combined, represent this week’s manifestation of the Six Sentence Story bloghopA+N Taken as a group, [A+Nx], are this week’s collection of stories of six and only/precisely six sentence in length.

Denise is the host.

The prompt word:

IRON

“What’s this thing,” new PF Flyers allowing a preadolescent en pointe, Jeremy finger-hooked the wooden handle of a dark metal triangle, all but out of sight on a cobwebbed shelf.

“It’s an iron,” his mother’s voice came from a distance not physically possible between two occupants in the same attic; had the boy been older by a multiple of adolescence, he might’ve identified the faux-leather and date-embossed book in her lap as the cause of her distraction.

“Where’s the power cord,” arm muscles pulled on his shoulder like a sailor holding the railing of a capsizing ship; being naturally athletic, which is to say, ‘young’, he let the weight get almost free of his grasp before transforming its downward path into an upwards curve.

“It doesn’t have one,” using the the two questions to break free of the emotions lurking, like ancient runes scribed with a felt tip pen across it’s glossy pages, she paused before opening the yearbook, detritus of the psychosocial battlefield of high school, for the moment, un-mourned.

With a pause that could not be mistaken, at least in a mother’s imagination, as her son’s sprint into the realms of his mind, racing up and down corridors lined with bookshelves of lost or not-yet-understood information, Jeremy laughed, “So it’s like a panini maker for clothes?”

Laughter fractured her mood, the pieces re-assembling into the memory of a girl determined to find the book at the end of the rainbow, its wisdom sufficient to make her seem just like her friends; Jeremy’s mother pulled her son close, both laughing at the endlessly fascinating puzzle of their respective worlds.

 

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Our most successful effort at a garden… “Thistle and …clover*
* over and over (lol)

Well, that certainly was fun.

This is the Ten Things of Thankful (TToT) bloghop) and last week we celebrated seven years of continuous activity. (For you arithmaphiles* that’s approximately 364 posts!)

So this week we are grateful for:

1) Una

2) Phyllis

3) Kristi and the co-hostinae Pat and LisaMimi and Dyanne, for all their work putting together the ‘versary

4) the Wakefield Doctrine for providing identifiable characteristics of the three personality types (clarks, scotts and rogers) that not only offer remarkable insight into how the other person is experiencing the world around them, but is a lot of fun as well! (Next Item)

5) rogerian expression! which, if you’ve been doing your reading is one of the more startlingly-delightful things rogers do. I was at a showing yesterday with a client. There was a studio, built appurtenant to the main house. It had two floors. There was a landing midway up the stairs from the garage level to the studio above. In the corner of this landing was a vertical row of stones. It was interesting, as the walls (forming the ninety degree interior angle of the corner), were clad in copper. The listing agent notices us, noticing this. He said, “That’s a wonderful artistic touch by the seller. It’s a water feature.” As we leaned five degrees out of vertical towards the clearly dry corner of the landing, he continued, “Its not on now, of course, but, if you look closely you can see a fixture up there above the topmost stone, (five more degrees), and down there, is a drain under the bottom is a drain. The effect is quite mesmerizing. The water gently flows down the wall, over the stones and gathers at the bottom… where a hidden pump regurgitates the water back to the top and maintain a continuous flow.”

6) the Book of Secret Rules (aka the Secret Book of Rules) for including among near-countless exemptions, special cases, loopholes and rhetorical mulligans, the delightful in use and expression: ‘hypograt’. This is surely the nitroglycerin of gratitude blogs. Sure, it manifests as an essentially negative event, but with the appropriate finesse, totally stands with traditional grats. (Friend of the Doctrine, Mimi is a past master of the framing of hypogratuitous events and occurrences, somehow reminding us that, even a snowy day in June might warrant the emotion of gratitude. (Not that it’s snowing.. but it does relate to the month. See Item 7 below.)

7) Eight days until Summer ends! How quickly the time flies. Totally inspires me to get outside today and work in the woods, with only a regular shirt on!

8) Friend of the Doctrine Kristi Campbell for joining in the festivities last weekend.

9) THIS SPACE AVAILABLE. If anyone out there would like to take the participation in a bloghop like the TToT for a ‘test drive’ , I have good news! Send in your Grat Item in a comment and I’ll post it right here at Number Nine!

10) Secret Rule 1.3 “...to approach the finish line is to see the race, from beginning to (near) end. Running is simply how one is relating themselves to the event and not separate and apart from the course or the other racers.”

 

 

* not a ‘real’ word

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Six Sentence Story -the Wakefield Doctrine-

Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)

This is the Six Sentence Story bloghop.

Hosted each Thursday, (or possibly Sunday, depending on your sense of reckoning and time), by Denise; the Six Sentence Story ‘hop offers a prompt word and a challenge: write a story six (and only six) sentences in length.

Try it.

Its fun!

Prompt word:

THERAPY

“Easy, Sarge, you’ve lost a lot of blood and are really messed up, but you’re in the medevac and five minutes out from base.”

“Sam, what about Sam…at my side when we walked into the ambush; we’ve been together since he joined up, hell, I trained him,” pride in the soldier’s voice put italics on the first pronoun and softened the second, “you said he’s ok, didn’t you?”

“Don’t worry, most of your platoon made it out all right,” the roar of the helicopter rotors drowned out sound, and then, thought; once back in the world, days bled into weeks, which knit themselves into months.

“Would you like to see your friend, Sam,” the wheelchair made the question moot, “A word of warning, few leave a battlefield without being changed;” once in the corridor, the chair took it’s direction from an arrow under the letters ‘Neurology’; soon, in a ward lined with silent beds, the soldier watched a man, sitting in a blue vinyl chair, before a row of windows, not looking out at the lawn, rather down at something by his side, blocked from view.

Pushing the wheelchair further into the room, the doctor’s voice was one of wonder, “He was standing between you and two dead enemy combatants when the extraction team found you;” rolling into view was the object of the silent man’s attention: a pair of brown-fur triangles bent at right angles to a scarred snout, a muzzle full of lethal teeth, all resting on the man’s thigh; “…but even after a life of violence and combat, your partner is, without question, the most effective therapy dog I’ve ever encountered.”

“Sam!” with a barely-visible flaring of nostrils, the dog’s tail began to move, all the while, never breaking eye contact with the silent man in his care.

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Those of you following our serial story, the Hobbomock Chronicles, may be aware we’ve written a new Episode, Episode Seventeen.

Thanks out to Denise and Mimi and Robert and the others who went and read this, the newest installment in our serial story. Mimi expressed, as have others, that the by-installment style of story-telling is inherently frustrating. My rogerian aspect, urged by my scottian secondary, will take this as a compliment, as the more exciting the forward-momentum of the narrative, the greater the desire to read ‘what happens next?!!’

As my buddy Bill would say, ‘Aye, there’s the rub.’ The thing about serial story writing for us, here at the Wakefield Doctrine, is we don’t know what happens next until we write it. This, I suspect is not so uncommon to those of us unable to write by outline. When you think about it, that should be no surprise. Lets consider the background we bring to this effort:

    • my interest in writing fiction is an offshoot of starting this blog
    • the Wakefield Doctrine is and remains not only the driving force behind my virtual persona, the original mission: write a Wakefield Doctrine post that a person could read once and be able to apply its principles in their own lives and enjoy the benefits of our little personality theory.
    • being in a world of letters, i.e. not only the blogosphere but the more general internet environment of the Facebook and other platforms, skill with the written word is a good thing,
    • of course, it didn’t take long before I realized that the price I paid for ignoring English class (in all levels of formal education) had finally come due.
    • the coolest thing about how the Wakefield Doctrine benefits me personally, is that, somehow, the inclinations of my predominant clarklike worldview have, in matters concerning the blog, been over-ridden; I realized that if I want to get better at this writing thing, I’d better spend as much time as possible with them what writes better’n I do
    • hence my participation in bloghops like Finish the Sentence Friday and Ten Things of Thankful and the eponymous Six Sentence Story. Them folks be quite good at the wordifying.
    • Finally, at some point in time, I stumbled upon the notion that, if you have characters that are engaging (and therefore real), they are more than happy to tell you the story.

Well… given how exciting Episode Seventeen was, I know I need to get on with the story, or Mimi will kill me.

The thing of it is, I don’t seem to be able to write unless I’m on a blog. No, seriously! I know many people who can whip out their Word and hammer out a story, like they was ringing a bell, (as Chuck Berry would say).

Alas, I cannot. If it don’t got a Save Draft/Preview/Publish button, then the keys don’t clack. So, since the initial impulse for writing this morning was to start a conversation with my characters, I thought I’d invite you along.

The room in which the characters had gathered was down the hall from the Library of Imagination, just two doors beyond the Great Room of Questionably-Repressed Memories. The latter, being more a series of alcoves than a single large room, for reasons obvious to most of us.

Standing next to a pair of leather wing-back chairs, Allyson Ross was pretending to be about to sit down. She wore a physician’s white coat and fishnet stockings that would be in style in the mid-1960s. Appropriately, as this was the fashion of her youth. The stockings, not the lab coat.

Micheal Stone was diligently acquiring a small group of supporting characters, very much like nacre, as a salve to his abrasive soul. He pretended to be listening to a barely-dressed Native American man by the name of Meklendou. Meklendou’s eyes were was greedy as Michael’s.

Perhaps most surprising, as we enter the room, was to see the real estate broker, standing in the geo-social center of the gathering. His eyes, clouded behind the lens of his reading glasses, were alive with interest at the voices of all the groups around him. Despite his enthusiasm, he was uncertain as to his welcome at any of them.

“Allyson!” the incorporeal narrator called, “You’re one of the most dynamic of the characters of Volume One, at least as of recent Episodes. Do you have a moment?”

Moved by an impulse she did not understand, (but feared was a new quality that the author had not deigned to let her know she possessed), touched the brass-nail edge of the chair next to her. Sitting, fighting a blush that grew from a visual from an old movie starring Sharon Stone, smiled, “By all means. Come. Join me.”

(to be continued)

 

 

the obvious musical selection*:

* ‘course, this is the Wakefield Doctrine

 

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Special Edition. VIIth Year ‘versary

Hard to believe (accept? understand? reconcile with the view out of life’s window passing with increasing velocity) it has been seven (or is that eight… ‘the number of the year only applying on December 31st’ I never quite got that distinction (usually brought to a clark’s attention by the nearest roger)  In any event… It was a while ago. Even by ‘real’ world accounting of the passage of time.

(by the way, Lizzi was one of the first lifeforms to do video social gatherings… way back in …well, back when the medium of choice was google Hangouts. I distinctly recall trying it out with her… with the time difference being five hours or something, it was a Monday evening here on my end… in any event. It worked. Two clarks talking on a video hookup. (Funny story. After three minutes of ‘Oh, hi’ …’So,’  err’ on my part.  The connection dropped, as often happened back then. I sat and looked at the dark screen. I knew that she probably didn’t hang up on me.   probably.  lol)

I believe I have a photo from a subsequent Friday, since I did not join this bloghop yesterday, I will leverage this antidote into a Grat Item Number Six

1)  Una and Phyllis

Una taking Phyllis for a walk in the forest.

 

2) the Wakefield Doctrine (sine qua and all)

3) Finish the Sentence Friday Really was my Solomon’s Shamir* in this virtual world. Here: one of the first Doctrine FTSF posts. It was through by participation in this ‘hop that I met just about all my future friends in the ‘sphere.

4) Living where we do ’cause there’s an ocean nearby (this taken five minutes from my office)

 

5) My co-hostinae who, over the years have demonstrated the grace under rhetorical pressures and temptations, never once blocking us…. lol

6) From one of our Friday Vid Chats (turned out that L. didn’t hang up on me on purpose)

From, according to the photo paste in WordPress, July 3 2014

 

7) THIS SPACE AVAILABLE If there is anyone ‘on the fence’ about participating, I have set aside this space. You want to see your Grats in lights? Send it in as a comment! Totally will post it here with as much attribution as you desire.

8) the Book of Secret Rules (aka the Secret Book of Rules) including the concept of hypo-grats, which, imo, distinguishes this gratitude bloghop from all others.

9) What? Link to early Doctrine TToT post? I thought you’d never ask! From July 2013 This Post

10) Secret Rule 1.3

 

* sorta like Green Lantern or maybe Cyclops (of the X Men)

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Anniversary music from the ’60s

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