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Six Sentence Story -the Wakefield Doctrine-

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Migrant Mother
Dorothea Lange 1936

 

This is the Six Sentence Story bloghop.

Denise is the host.

The rules state: six sentence-length story, no more and no less.

This week’s prompt word:

PLANT

“Here, grab on,” I planted my boots on either side of the front door-that- was-now-a-hatch and extended my hand down into the dark interior of a broken puzzle that, until recently, had been a home.

No longer cloaked by a week’s worth of rain clouds, the sun provided heartless illumination of a devastated countryside: the remains of mud-crumpled houses, barns and indoor furniture left behind by the receding waters. The sky, as sterile as the inside of a Fabergé egg, glowed an immaculate blue, proclaiming its innocence like a drunk staring vacuously, while his wife, trying to stand, leaves red-slid stains on the white refrigerator.

I felt a pull on my hand, followed by a face that resisted the temptation to show relief, as if to do so would break the precarious seal between nightmare and waking life, thereby making both worlds all the more real.

A writer at Life magazine, at another time, referred it ‘the thousand-yard stare’.

It’s the look on the face of a human being, who, in the name of continued survival, has abandoned frivolous emotion; its the visage of a quality in some people that refuses to lay down and die, it is to Hope, as Time is to a drugstore wristwatch.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Well, what exactly do you want to know? Whether I am a clark or a scott or roger? If you have to ask, then you need to keep reading the Posts for two reasons: a)to get a clear enough understanding to be able to make the determination of which type I am and 2) to realize that by definition I am all three.* *which is true for you as well, all three...but mostly one

Comments

  1. UP says:

    heartless illumination bravo on that alone. Great line.

  2. Wow, nicely done take on this photograph, Clark.

  3. Wow! Excellent!

  4. We’ve seen that stare here, people pulled from the floods, too often.

  5. Powerful Six. Particularly the last sentence.

  6. Phyllis says:

    Everything does tie together nicely, thank you.

  7. Romi says:

    A powerful description.

  8. Lisa Tomey says:

    Well executed! That photo says so much and your words brought it more to life.

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      thanks, Lisa

      (that is surely one of my all-time favorite photos) (interesting story behind the photographer, Dorothea Lang)