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Six Sentence Story -the Wakefield Doctrine-

Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)

This is the Six Sentence Story.

Each week, our host, Denise, provides a ‘prompt word’ and requests that we, all of us, write a story using this word.

The only requirement: the story must be six sentences in length.  Once the story is written, the next step is to return to her site and link your post (into the blue rectangle, that’s subtly labeled: ‘Click to view and add your links’). Pretty simple, isn’t it?

That way everyone gets to read everyone else’s Six Sentence Story, ya know?

This week the word is,

Constant

“Cah…Constant….. Constantin, Constantin Szarbo, Cyrus St. Loreto’s personal angel of death, to what do I owe the honor,” slurred words firmed as Rafael Valdes rose from the granite bench and crossed the concrete moat that separated those seeking rest in the shade of Brickell Park from those very-much-not-at-rest driving by the small green patch among the concrete and steel towers of Miami’s financial district.

The once-young former priest felt his imagination pulled from its stupor by the sight of shadows, one preceding him, the other lagging behind; being late morning, the sun’s unrelenting light reflecting from the glass sides of surrounding skyscrapers created an alien sky of multiple suns, each blasting the earth in hues ranging from bronze to gold, like the view from a planet too near the center of the galaxy, it was beautiful-bordering-on-hellish.

The black-on-black Aston Martin DB11 waiting at the curb appeared even darker for all the surrounding light and caused the stream of traffic (both mechanical and biological) to bend around it, a black hole denying observers even the hope of seeing within, much less identifying it’s occupant.

(In this stream): …a man with depleted white hair like the sullen scribblings on a grade school blackboard paused in front of the church adjacent to the park, his face showed the struggle to deny some part of his day; a young street-vendor with his cart of quick meals and ethnic snacks, approached from a narrow side street, looked towards the small park and faltered; an attractive woman, her tailored suit awkwardly new, hastened her pace with a frown of determination every bit a talisman drawn from childhood nightmares.

Rafael Valdes’ right hand rose to his throat, frayed collar serving to highlight, like the pale skin on the fourth finger of a recent widower, the missing clerical collar, “Tell your boss Cyrus  that I’ll do what I want and… ” like a backyard voodoo priest’s curse, the last mouthful of gin reached up into his speech centers, words stumbled, slurred, then recovered, “not even his buddy the Archbishop is gonna to keep me from exposing the sins of those who hide in their stained glass castles.”

The black car’s passenger-side window, like a lunar eclipse on a dark night, rose from the door, covered the impossibly dark space within and the very expensive automobile re-joined the passing stream of traffic.

 

 

 

 

 

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TToT -the Wakefield Doctrine- ‘the first weekend of not-Winter’

Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)

‘The paleness of timidity. The green of the fern ring and the cotton-ball vagueness of the the apple blossoms are testimony to the harshness of the winter past.’
(Landscape orientation)
The scene is from the window on the side of our house. This window is, technically, on the second floor, and therefore while the lawn in the immediate foreground is visible (and somewhat foreshortened) one can see the tree house to the far left (middle) and the sky to the upper left (middle).
Despite the scene being comprised of: lawn, white-blossomed apple tree, pale-green circle of fern rising around a large tree stump, one relatively healthy pine tree and the aforementioned treehouse (a darkened rectangle higher among the trees than a darkened rectangle should be), everything is pale and faded looking.
Its almost as if the effort to survive the Winter past has so depleted the resources of all plants that all they can do is sorta stand there and try to remain upright while catching their photosynthetic breath.

 

Non-winter weekend looks to have the potential for sweating and earth-moving, two of my five favorite things to do. I will save the specifics of (any) yard projects for my list (I didn’t start blogging yesterday, ya know). Hopefully I’ll have some interesting photos of Una and the garden and such.

This is, of course, the Ten Things of Thankful, aka the TToT bloghop. Each week our host, Josie Two Shoes raises the shades, opens a window or two and welcomes any and all to share their lists of things and people, events and places that elicited and otherwise caused them to feel grateful since last we gathered.

1) Una

2) Phyllis

3) the Book of Secret Rules (aka the Secret Book of Rules) Well, you know, “...if you can think it, it deserves to be a Rule“.

4) Val (and Lisa and the gang at the Six Sentence Story). We had another dueling Six Sentence Story. (Not dueling in the sense of adversarial, dueling as in ….well, two of them. lol) So I did a Six Sentence Story of the noir variety and Val graciously accepted the challenge to write her own Six Sentence Story based on the scene. Here, read it for your ownselfs…. Story One, Story Two*

5) Work (where I’ve happened upon a rare ‘asleep-at-the-wheel’ moment over at ‘the youtube’…. I hope the link lasts long enough for you to enjoy the Abbey Road cut below…at the moment, however, I’m listening to Sgt. Pepper’s Lonely Hearts Club Band. Damn, them mop-tops sho were talented fellas)

6) the Graviteers: val and kristi, joy and may and, back with the ‘F = Gm1m2/rPosse’, lisa.

7) Garden projects (tbd)**

8) THIS SPACE AVAILABLE (anyone needing a hand getting started on a TToT post, send in your items in a comment, I’ll post it/them here and before you can say ‘Come on down!’ you’ll be totally having fun.)

9) Sunday Supplement (in photos, of course)

‘Phyllis planting flowers at the foot of Ola’s grave, a nearby tree bends a knee in respect to her efforts.’
(Landscape orientation)
Standing beyond the far-corner of the fenced-in portion of the backyard, looking back towards the house, we see Ola’s grave in the lower-left foreground. In this same, lower-half of the photo, to the opposite side, is a most remarkable pine tree.
Leaving the ground (as do all trees) the trunk rises about a foot only to dip down in a curve towards the earth, as if ambivalent about the decision to leave the protection of the ground. The curve, showing a girth of, say, a full-grown telephone pole, brushes the orangy-brown pine needles that carpet this part of the yard, then sweeps upwards at an angle. Like an airplane finally committed to taking off from the runway or a dolphin, it’s dream of exploring the world of air, now too strong, shoots upwards for the clouds.
Phyllis is seen kneeling at the foot of the grave, her face and upper body are dark and lighter colors, enough flesh-tone to prevent us from thinking that another tree has taken root to guard Ola’s grave.
Our eyes are drawn to a small spark of the blue jeans that mark the spot on which Phyllis is resting. Seeing this blue (a color that is kind of startling in contrast to the sea of greens and browns), we immediately see others directly in front of her. She is bringing color and variety to the area, not to highlight the quiet hues, but, like Ola herself, to add an element of motion and un-restrained life.
The gravesite is of the traditional rectangular shape. Mostly a beach-sand grey shade with dashes of browns and weightless blacks that give texture to the otherwise smooth surface. The shape of the grave is defined by a single row of (lighter) grey cobblestones, marking the perimeter, squat guards carved from a substance that has survived the ages. At the far end of the sandy grave (from Ola’s favorite beach) is the marker. A smaller rectangle of stone, part reflectively smooth, part etched with letters, the letters borrow from the material they are cut from, the solidity and permanence of the granite, Ola’s name and the dates of her time with us.

‘Una and the garden-to-be that bears the likeness of her name.’
(Landscape orientation).
Lying on the lower bout of the letter ‘U’ that starts Una’s garden, the namesake of the aforementioned garden looks up at the camera (and in doing so, at us) and manages to convey an expression of enthusiastic acceptance of the responsibility for protecting the garden-that-would-be. Of course, given the garden is, at the time of this photo, simply a curved rectangle of dark brown earth, we are encouraged to believe that Una is protecting the garden from the encroaching green of the surrounding lawn.

10) SR 1.3

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wyHiWyJaYTk

 

* the comments at Val’s were as much fun as I’ve seen in a while, you totally should consider join in on the Six Sentence fun next week

** yeah, might be taking the ‘brevity is the soul of wit’ just a bit far…

 


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Six Sentence Story -the Wakefield Doctrine- “…two, three…”

Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)

Welcome to this week’s edition of Six Sentence Story.

Every week Denise suggests a prompt word and invites one and all to write a story of six sentences, a story that uses, is based upon or otherwise involves the word. It’s fun, its relaxing and the variety of stories you’ll encounter each week, well, lets just say, ‘If you find yourself bored reading any of the Sixes on these pages then ya gotta write one for yourself.’

If you recall, last week we tried an experiment. I invited another blogger, (Lisa Listwa) to write a Six using the Doctrine’s Six as her starting point. The result, as expected, was a very clever and quite enjoyable story.

I continue to be intrigued by the idea, i.e. one person writes a story and another writes their own, using the first as a starting point. Sort of what the jazz guys do in improvisation. The basic melody is there but it spins off in novel and fun trajectories.

Interestingly, the writing of a ‘base Six’ is proving a new kind of challenge for me as a writer. So this week I’m imposing on another member of our group to help me out with one more multi-Six this week. Val, ever the supportive and encouraging writer has consented to write a variation on this week’s Six. (Thanks, Val!)

I’m discovering that writing a Six for the purpose of collaboration (or whatever one calls what we’re doing here) is different that writing a ‘standalone’ Six. I’ve decided to stay with ‘the Case of the Missing Starr’, my detective WIP for the context, but will be experimenting with other forms …as time goes by.

(clever segue, no?)

If ya see Bogie then you’re thinking, ‘Oh boy! A little Thursday noir.’ This week we rejoin our favorite detective, Ian Devereaux, as he discovers that too much attention, like too many women, doesn’t seem so bad at first.… (lol…no, zoe, I have no idea where that came from). Never fear, our intrepid detective can always escape to the smoke and neon world of the Bottom of the Sea Strip Club and Lounge for a relaxing lunch.

The word is:

echo                        ECHO

 

After 3 hours of writing case-notes, I decided to walk down the block to the Bottom of the Sea Strip Club and Lounge for lunch; I asked my admin, Hazel, if she cared to join me, she looked down at her chest, moved her right shoulder in a circular motion, forwards and backwards, looked up and said, “Nah, I’m good.”

“Honest, Lou I don’t know nothin about nobody harassing the dancers in the parkin lot”, as I approached the club I saw Lou Ceasare hold the glowing end of his cigar an inch from the nose of a tall, amphetamine-thin guy in a sweat-shiny iridescent suit; using his Dutch Masters Corona like a down-city laser pointer, the club owner offset his five foot four height with a ferocity that’d make a Great White shark look at home in the koi pond of a Buddhist monastery.

“Who said anything about a parkin lot,” turning his head, Lou addressed his question to the elderly couple trying to get past the two men on their way to the public library across the street, “is there a fuckin echo out here?”

As two dressed-for-court attorneys approached the entrance, Lou nodded to both and held the door open, refrigerated air and music-in-the-key-of-testosterone poured out onto the sidewalk and headed for the gutter; as the door sighed closed he got very close to the man now standing with his back against the plate-glass window, “I gave you one job, watch out for the girls, make sure they don’t get hassled by any closing-time-Romeos, and yet one of my best girls, Misty, just told me she had to run over some guy’s foot last night.”

Lou is not tall and he is not thin, some have likened his physique to ‘a fire hydrant with a temper’, but tall as the other guy was, he had as much chance of getting the upper hand as a hand-me-down Cabbage Patch doll; I decided my karma’d be enhanced if I somehow prevented further mayhem on the poor schmuck trying to blend in with the background, which unfortunately consisted of ‘LIVE NUDES’ in five foot red-neon lettering.

“Hey Devereaux, heard the Feds were on your ass, I’m sure the FBI guys bugging my joint will be happy to pass along any messages you wanna leave ’em,” smiling broadly, Lou grabbed my upper arm with the compressive force of a medium-sized alligator and with a slight jerk of his head, let the tall guy sidle along the plate-glass until he found the room to break into a run.

 

background music for improvisation

 

 

 

 

 

 

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TToT -the Wakefield Doctrine- ‘…of tree stumps and self-improvement, instability is the key’.

Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)

‘A change both for the former tree and the earth that gave it meaning. One moves on, the other remains, subtly changed forever.’

Lets go for brevity

1) the Wakefield Doctrine as a tool for self-improving oneself. If for no other reason it is predicated on the notion that we, all of us, live in a reality that is personal. (Nothing weird or spacey, just personal… as in: my perspective does not create the entire world (the world in common, the world ‘out there’) it does, however, impart values, emphasis and, like the blue-and-red cardboard 3D glasses that we used to get back in the day, to see Thirteen Ghosts, (the original, not the recent version with Tony Shalhoub and the always excellent Matthew Lillard), you put them on and your see the ghosts. Of course the ghosts are there all along, the glasses allow you to see them. Perspective is a lot like cardboard 3D glasses. (cont’d Item 3).

2) Josie Two Shoes. Proprietoress of this here bloghop here. The doors are always open, the lights are on ever weekend, without fail. Thanks, J

3) So, you know how we suggest the best way to determine your own predominant worldview? What?! You don’t?! Welll You learn the descriptions of the three worldviews, the Outsider(clarks), the Predator(scotts) and the Herd Member(rogers) well enough to allow viewing the world through the perspective of each of the three. The view that is least blurry is your predominant worldview. The cool thing is, you have, with the aid of the Wakefield Doctrine, access to two additional pair of cardboard 3D glasses. Get them and you can see the world as ‘the other two’* experience. The amazing thing is that you will find you are able to cope with the worlds of the other two. Maybe not smoothly or automatically at first, but with practice? Definitely. I’ll refer you to one Lizzi Lewis and Cynthia Calhoun. They’ve experienced this. Of course, both are exceptional woman-people, so maybe they’re not the most impartial. But it’s true.

4) Una because she reminds me that today is the only real day there is.

Una surveys the surrounding woods. The broad expanse of flat, green(ish) lawn remains peaceful and un-trodden, little suspecting the presence of the balls, one blue and fiercely dense, the other large and disposed to identifying with the flat earth.
They both bide their time accepting the fact full self-actualization lies with the vigilant dog, who in turn delays her own enjoyment in deference to duty.

5) Phyllis  ya know?

6) The Six Sentence Story is a bloghop that we recommend. It’s a fun way to sharpen your wordage skills. No, seriously, not to make it sound like work or some kind of writing class or something. Well, kinda is, but the big difference is it’s a comfortable, totally supportive environment. I’m like almost always reading a Six by say, Pat or Val or Paul and sit back and think, ‘How did they manage to do that?!’ And then you try to imitate it for your own Six and ain’t nobody be in your face with ‘Copycat! Go get yer own words!’ lol Nope, not even once.

7) The Book of Secret Rules (aka the Secret Book of Rules) (inquire within) At least on Item is brevitic.

8) THIS SPACE AVAILABLE (Any new Reader or random visitor, like what you see? Want to participate? Have only one of two Grat Items? Fret no more! Send them in as a Comment and they’ll totally be placed here with full attribution.)

9) Sunday Supplement: ‘Instability and the Beast’

“The Beast begins to make his bid for freedom…”

“Employing a very risky vaulting maneuver, the Beast attains the edge of freedom…”

 

“A sleeping captor is no captor at all…”

“Embracing the power of instability, the Beast heads to the car in the enclosure. Every bit a God to the formerly earth-bound Beast, the wheeled vehicle awaits in the canvas cathedral.”

 

“To walk or to drive, that is the question. The top of the earth is both freedom and restriction to the Beast.””

10) SR 1.3

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* example: I’m a clark. ‘the other two’ are scott and roger


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Finish the Sentence Friday -the Wakefield Doctrine-

Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)

Friday. Friday in May, no less. Where does the time go? Which can only mean it’s time for ‘Finish the Sentence Friday’

Lets hear from the hostinae of this fine, fine bloghop

Hi all! We’re live on Thursday, May 3 at 10pm with the sentence “My favorite thing about my neighborhood is…”
The linkup will remain open through late Sunday evening.
Write about your neighborhood! There’s always something to say right? The park around the corner, a favorite path, a friendly family nearby… Kenya G. Johnson and I hope to see you there! Link up with us here:
https://www.kenyagjohnson.com/
or here:
http://www.findingninee.com/

So, what they’re saying is that I should consider the following incomplete and do my best to make it whole.

My favorite thing about my neighborhood is...”

“… that it, is very much of a New England tenor.”

The photo above pretty much illustrates our familial/Doctrine demographic. Phyllis is a roger, therefore we do, in fact, live in a neighborhood. I am a clark and our house is that brown-and-roof-colored square down the end of the driveway in the center of the photo.

I would argue that whenever there is more than one person involved in creating/shaping a common reality, the best of the both are manifested in the compromise.

So there we are, as rogers would prefer, one home in a smallish residential street development in southern Rhode Island. Being in New England. The spectrum of acceptable social engagement among neighbors ranges from attempts at summer block parties (they’re not from around here), to a nod and three-of-four-fingers-on-the-steering-wheel raised in acknowledgment driving up the street, to monosyllabic conversations, usually on the occasion of a blizzards, hurricanes or un-planned encounters putting the trash cans at the curbside.

So much for the rogerian influence. As apparent in the photo, we ‘the exception’ to the homes in our development. Every other house on our street sits with fifty or so feet of nicely landscaped and maintained front lawn between them the public-no-mans land of the street. The land that makes up the lot on which our house sits is, other than the afore-mentioned driveway, is all ‘backland’ running from the back lot lines of the surrounding house, back into the woods. (clarks reading this are surely hearing the Doctrine adage, ‘clarks do not seek attention, but will not tolerate being ignored.’)

That said, being a roger, Phyllis has a natural inclination to be a part of the herd*.  Did someone say, “Hey, clark! You and Phyllis, despite driving through a neighborhood to get home, when you stop at the end of the driveway it’s you and her and Una. Kinda clarklike setting, non?”

Well, for your consideration:

Out in our woods, Phyllis caused to be created, a ‘neighborhood of two’.  lol  (No, really, it is a treehouse. Because that is the nature of the rogerian worldview. To have a Herd.)

*  well beyond the scope of this post, suffice to say the personal reality of (a) roger is grounded in one’s membership in the group, the Herd. The Herd, literal or figurative, manifests the undying rationale of the worldview of a roger, i.e. the world is a complex but definable place, the people in it, while varied and different are all driven to discover, learn and live by ‘the Rules’.

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