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Wednesday Warmup, Six Sentence Story -the Wakefield Doctrine- (when cleverness flags, alliterate!)

Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)

NPD

uh oh! 10:05 pm Wednesday. Nothin  Well, not exactly nothing. I have a prompt word, ‘fire’. And I have zoe’s instructions to us all, write a story of six sentences and involve the prompt word.

Funny,  well, no, I guess, not so funny. (ed note: I’m here again, only it’s 6:41 am and all I have is a cup of coffee, an idea and a totally disturbing lack of confidence in my abilities. I’m tempted to tell you the idea here first, before the story. But that would break the Code of the Six. and it would be so clarklike to try and hedge against failure. But, as zoe must be saying to Joule, at this very moment, “He’s right, ya know. The Code’s the Code. What say we go out back and make sure them damn Jué yuan haven’t snuck back into the woods,  when we get back, he’ll surely have managed to write what he must write. Why, no, Joule I have no idea why there’s a photo of the fabulous Paris Hilton on this post! Well, yeah, maybe, but the prompt word is fire, not Troy. lol… you wanna be the one to tell him?”)

Is he awake?

I fear your son joins so many other young people, his wandering the forbidden places may have resulted in becoming another causality of the UFO phenomena, though I admit I’m surprised, he’s always been so even-headed, never one for such outlandish ideas.

She hovered near the bed where her only son rested, her worry preventing her from staying still and, moving about the room, her long hair streaming behind her, snapped like a whip with each sudden change of direction.

They say there are more and more like this; mostly young people and always in the same areas, the barren deserted areas they’ve taken to calling ‘the land at the edge of the world’.

Mom… you’re here, it was so amazing, it was like light but you could feel it and there were strange people and they wore strange things on their bodies and when they saw us hiding behind the rocks they waved as if welcoming us.

Her husband swam from their home and headed to council chambers, it being his son who witnessed the Unidentified Fiery Object, he no longer doubted the tales and, at the risk of ridicule, would force the Mer Nation to listen, to be warned, that not only did fire exist, but it was wielded by aliens.

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Well, what exactly do you want to know? Whether I am a clark or a scott or roger? If you have to ask, then you need to keep reading the Posts for two reasons: a)to get a clear enough understanding to be able to make the determination of which type I am and 2) to realize that by definition I am all three.* *which is true for you as well, all three...but mostly one

Comments

  1. lesliesholly says:

    Oh, very clever!

  2. UP says:

    Slick! Very slick. I like it.

  3. Cynthia says:

    Like the X-Files! Mulder is a clark, me thinks. :P

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      totally

      and he’s one of the less obvious male clarks (along with Mickey Rourke and Robert DiNiro), and, yeah, she was a total roger

  4. Coolio. (no, not referencing ancient rap artist lol)

  5. oldegg says:

    How important it is to see the world through others eyes not only our own. A few years ago I wrote a short story about a man rescuing a mermaid and then falling in love with her so consider myself an expert on these matters.

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      I would submit that there is nothing more important. (Let me qualify that, as it is at the heart of the Wakefield Doctrine), to be able and to be willing to recognize and accept that those around are (potentially) not only seeing the world differently, they are experiencing the world differently. All reality has the potential, on a level either great or small, of being entirely personal.

  6. messymimi says:

    Well told!

  7. ivywalker says:

    Very, very cool! Nice twist too!