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Six Sentence Story -the Wakefield Doctrine- (Tales from the Six Sentence Café & Bistro)

Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)

This is the Six Sentence Story

Denise is the host.

The prompt word for the week is:

CONFETTI

“Nick, I really fucked things up, man,” the Sophomore, looking up at the bearded face of his mentor at the Six Sentence Café & Bistro, sat like the sole uninvited guest in the last pew during the funeral of a widowed orphan.

“Take it slow, young dude, start at the beginning,” the Gatekeeper spoke quietly, although he had, coming upon the college student sitting alone at the table directly in front of the small bandstand, seamlessly converted a good-natured laugh into a look of quiet concern; with a renewed appreciation of the contrast between his outwards appearance and his inner self, he sat opposite the student.

“What’re you two conspiring about now?” the Bartender, stepping out of the dark of the hall that lead to the Manager’s Office and the elevator to the basement storage, put a case of Chivas on the bar with as much a display of effort as shoplifting a Michael Kors knockoff, and walked towards the center of the Bistro.

“For a young person you have pretty eclectic tastes, quick, tell us something about this song that you think we old folks don’t know…”

“Careful kid, your friendly-if-not-at-times-scary neighborhood bartender is settin’ you up, she’s a living illustration of the etymology of the term ‘fan’… ”

Denise held out a half-crumpled pack of Luckies, and shrugging off the lack of interest, lit her own; the flare of light from her cupped hands illuminated a jagged scar on her upper lip that had the effect of softening already subtle eyes, “Nick, much as I love the artist singing from our very expensive PA, I believe your young friend was about to provide us with some backstory on last night’s break in.”

“Hey, ho!” staring at the bartender’s bandaged wrist, the Gatekeeper’s voice drew the unwelcome spotlight from the student, “Someone be getting ink, and besides the depths of your encyclopedic knowledge of the better music of the late ’60s and early ’70s is surpassed only by the vagueness of your personal history,” looking up at the woman standing next to the small table, Nick’s voice began to clip as accumulating dBs mirrored his growing impatience, “Not that I don’t respect your right to privacy, but ticker tape and confetti ain’t my thing.”

 

 

 

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Six Sentence Story -the Wakefield Doctrine- (Tales from the Six Sentence Café & Bistro)

Welcome to the Six Sentence Story (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)

This is a Six Sentence Story

Denise is the host and, to the best of our understanding, neither condemns nor condones this playing fast and loose with tradition that forms the foundation of the Six Sentence Story ‘hop.

Prompt word:

CONTROL

“No fuckin’ way! You can’t take those, you said all you needed were cell photos to lock up a snap bid for a sorority.”

The Sophomore’s words, aimed at the young man walking away from the loading dock, carried a hurt tone that bounced off the shoulders of the girl, now halfway down the alley, even before the steel doors shut behind the three young people.

Roger, a burlap bag bouncing off his denim-clad shin with less sound than a cloth clapper inside a felt bell, moved with an urgency in contrast with the casual, in control, smile of his voice, “Thanks, sport, I couldn’t have gotten this stuff out without your help, and we want you to know how much we appreciate it.”

Jogging a few skip-steps to catch up with the girl, caused his long dark hair to momentarily obscure his face; had there been an observer of sufficient age or expertise in music history, his resemblance to at least two folk singers of the 1970s would’ve startled them.

The girl was short, had long brown hair that did little to soften the gold wire-rimmed glasses magnifying her ‘D Color’ eyes, wore a blue madras shirt which was missing the last pearl button, just above a smudged macrame belt; her strained effort to appear relaxed was common to early-evening drunks and misbehaving children. As she turned towards the green Plymouth Valiant, parked next to an over-flowing dumpster, her companion, now pulling her by the hand, provided a staccato farewell of leather boot-heels on greasy cobblestones.

 

 

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