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Six Sentence Story -the Wakefield Doctrine- Poetry Slam concours d’élégance 2026

Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)

This is the Doctrine’s contribution to the Six Sentence Story bloghop.

Hosted by Denise, constrained by a sentence limit (high and low) of six, there are worse ways to spend the remaining time you have on earth.

Prompt word:

WORD

“Wait here…” the tall, thin man turned from the four-foot automaton as the spotlight, in a vain attempt to pin-mount the Proprietor, swept the stage even as the overhead lighting dimmed, revived and faded with a sighed, ‘Our-show-now-begins‘.

With the departure of the emcee, the view for most guests consisted of the top-half of the microphone stand and a perfect circle of light cast on the brick wall behind the stage; from below their line-of-sight, a misshapen moon rose in partial eclipse, a rectangular card on which words frilled in the font of a 1920’s silent movie.

{THERE ONCE WAS A ‘DROID FROM NANTUCKET}

The spotlight’s smoke-dusted beam shuddered and blinked once.

{ALONE SINCE HIS GOD KICKED THE BUCKET}

From a far corner or, perhaps, one of the privacy-veiled alcoves, “Word!” Laughter simmered until muted by a flare of shssshh’s’ even as the linen moon rose anew:

{HIS NEW FRIENDS QUITE NICE,}

{SAVE ONE HEART OF ICE!}

In silence, the SRO crowd in the Six Sentence Café & Bistro leaned forward as one; their only tell, a wood-on-wood creak as the final intertitle card, rose into the spotlight:

{THIS TIN-MAN’D DUMBWAITER, REFUSES TO QUIT.}

 

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Well, what exactly do you want to know? Whether I am a clark or a scott or roger? If you have to ask, then you need to keep reading the Posts for two reasons: a)to get a clear enough understanding to be able to make the determination of which type I am and 2) to realize that by definition I am all three.* *which is true for you as well, all three...but mostly one

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  1. I too inhaled and chuckled uncomfortably with the crowd reading the Dumbwaiter’s opening “line”, lol
    Excellent scene and performance!

  2. Frank Hubeny says:

    I like how the crowd almost silently leans in for the last line.

  3. Spira says:

    Excellent choice the combination of silent movie devices and an automaton in a SSC&B Slam Poetry night 👏

  4. Chris Hall says:

    Love it, and love it – good old little automaton… 👏👏👏

  5. Misky says:

    First let me say, the Poetry Slam has been so much fun. I’ve learned how to make an audio file, and that reading a poem aloud changes enjambment is such interesting ways. So thank you for that.

    Secondly, I do hope that the Dumbwaiter is given a permanent role in your future stories because I’ve come to adore this little guy.

    Thank you again to you, Denise, and Chris for a very enjoyable week.

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      ikr? fun it was.

      hey, by definition, anyone/anything that interacts with others in the reality of the SSC&B surely has enough heart to keep itself going

  6. What a performance!

  7. Liz H-H says:

    I think the dumb waiter needs a boost into the spotlight, and a Canadian lake to rename! Ha!

  8. I’m glad he got up and “said” his piece and his peace. It almost feels as if one of us should turn to the others and say, as has been said so often about the “puppy that followed me home,” “Can we keep him?”

  9. So the droid, of his god devoid, finally roared, I need Freud. When will he meet up with Frankenstein?

  10. Reena Saxena says:

    Hope he has found another God :)

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      perhaps… goodness knows there is no shortage of them

      (cannot resist paraphrasing the title of a Philip K Dick novel: “Do androids pray to electric gods”)

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