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Six Sentence Story -the Wakefield Doctrine- “a Six Sentence Café & Bistro Six …cont’d”

Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)

This is the Doctrine’s contribution to the Six Sentence Story bloghop.

Hosted by Denise, constrained by a sentence limit (high and low) of six, there are worse ways to spend the remaining time you have on earth.

Previously, in our tale…

Prompt word:

PINCH

La Raconteuse! What a pleasant sur… wait, are you limping?”

The tall, thin man had just placed a tray holding a sterling silver coffee carafe, several china mugs and assorted sugars and creme on a folding tray stand next to one of the double-sized round tables halfway between the bar and the bandstand; looking around the Bistro for his guest, Lou, who at the moment was standing next to the writer his right forearm horizontal and level; the polite solicitousness of his offer of support was in contrast to the expression on his face.

“Two questions: if your foot is the result of someone making a bad decision regarding your ability to walk, just say the word; if, however, if this a legitimate case of natural causes, I got a guy; one of the top orthodontal surgeons in the area until he developed something of a jones for slow horses and fast women, if you get my drift, but not for nothin’ I had a bad pinched nerve and this guy, with a single touch and a twist, pain gone,”  Lou pulled out a chair for the red-headed writer at the table.

Returning to the table with a tray of desserts, the tall, thin man looked towards the hallway that led to the Manager’s office and smiled, “Mr. Frank, if you please!”

Turning to Lou, he continued, “I don’t believe you two have met, Lou, this is Frank; Frank, this is Lou Caesare owner of the Bottom of the Sea Strip Club and Lounge and a friend of the SSC&B;” Lou, already standing extended a hand that looked like a catcher’s mitt with a diamond pinky ring, nodded, “Pleased to meet’cha, Frank, on yer way over here, what say you drop a quarter in the jukebox and you can tell us about your invisible fren’?”

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Well, what exactly do you want to know? Whether I am a clark or a scott or roger? If you have to ask, then you need to keep reading the Posts for two reasons: a)to get a clear enough understanding to be able to make the determination of which type I am and 2) to realize that by definition I am all three.* *which is true for you as well, all three...but mostly one

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  1. Frank Hubeny says:

    Thank you for the introduction to Lou! That gives me material for next week’s tale.

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      ur welcome glad that everyone will be there (I trust the Aurelia will make it back to the Bistro)

  2. Oo. Hopefully Frank will spill the beans about his invisible fren’. Most fascinating.

  3. Chris Hall says:

    Aha, some excellent material! I shall also follow with this, and write around that table. As well as Frank, I am thinking Aurelia could be there too, unless she’s still dreaming…

  4. Reena Saxena says:

    And now, who is this invisible fren?

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      you’ll need to ask Frank! lol it’s his rather interesting new ‘character’

      while we have you on the line, love to have you stop by the SSC&B… we can reserve an alcove in case you wanted to get some writing done as the action continues next week or just join us at the suddenly three-times-the-circumference of every other round table at the Bistro or, of course sit at the bar

  5. Lou is a good friend and a bad enemy, I’d hope to always stay on his good side.

  6. Interesting story lines. I have a lot to catch up on.

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      If I may, the beauty part of the Six Sentence Café & Bistro is it’s quality of fictional consistency.

      As it happens, of late that we’re seeing this actualizing in ‘multi-writer’ stories as Chris and Mimi and Denise and Reelika and Frank put their characters/avatars in the Café (and as Jules Winfield says, ‘Have adventures’)

      The key, imo, is found in having a balance of a concrete/enduring location (both geographic and story-setting sense) along with an certain open-endedness i.e. the old, former mill building housing the Café consists of five-to-seven floors most remain unexplored.

      You are invited to stop by anytime, in what we refer to as a ‘walk-on’ i.e. put your character there and see what happens. (Several friends of the SSC&B will simply sit at the bar or one of the tables and watch.) Frank and Reelika are good examples of how much fun this can be.

      Having written a description of the physical scene far too many times. (and to the dismay of Commentators who receive very long Replies to there questions lol) here are two brief travelogues.

      Geographic:
      From a somewhat busy thoroughfare in the nearest medium-sized city, look for the side street where the last-remaining cobbler has a shop, (next to a seamstress with a sign in the window ‘Wedding Gowns on Consignment). Continue walking until you come to a lane (sidewalks now reduced to one side of the street only) and the buildings are growing larger, emptier and made of granite and brick instead of glass, steel and indifference. The road you’re on seems to broaden (as much to the empty lots of a once thriving industrial area of the city) and up on the left is a lane where the sidewalks are somehow cleaner, less pink-bubblegum splotched.
      The Six Sentence Café & Bistro is in a building, (former textile mile if you must know)… non-descript but clearly well-kept amidst hulks, shells and remnants of the discarded infrastructure of a long-gone industrial engine.

      Interior:
      There is one entrance (three granite steps down from the street) and once through a small foyer (with a cigarette machine on top of which are free shopper magazines and dog-eared issues of ‘The WatchTower’) a glass and stainless steel door.
      Inside there is a long, mahogany wood bar running along the right hand wall. Mirrors behind the shelves of liquor reflect out to the Cafe proper. Halfway down the bar, on the back wall is the entrance to the kitchen. At the far end is the service station (and Mimi’s seat).
      Beyond the bar is a hallway that turns to the right that leads to the Manager’s office. Beyond that, the hallway becomes gradually darker (not in a good, ‘hey aren’t you warm in that sweater’ way, more in the ‘no turning around won’t help…and running? Lol go ahead… we like it when they run’)
      Opposite the bar is the open area of the Bistro. There’s a small stage, halfway up the righthand wall and if you were to stand on the stage and look out, any number of round, heavily-lacquered wood tables and chairs for the audience. Beyond is the outer wall, the granite wall that you would see from the street. The columns that support the floors above form alcoves that are curtained off for privacy.
      The building is in an under-redeveloped section of the former industrial zone in a mid-sized city. Granite, brick and cast iron are the predominant building materials.

      most recently there is a new location (with in the building, of course), Room 215 (in recent adventures) it’s probably on the second floor, but you know, this is the Six Sentence Caé & Bistro

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