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Six Sentence Story -the Wakefield Doctrine- [an Ian Devereaux Six]

Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)

This is the Doctrine’s contribution to the Six Sentence Story bloghop.

Hosted by Denise, constrained by a sentence limit (high and low) of six, there are worse ways to spend the remaining time you have on earth.

Previously…

Prompt word:

MARK

“Ian, Ian, Ian, I swear you’d forget your head if it wasn’t sewn on to your shoulders.”

It wasn’t how I could hear my mother’s voice so clearly over the span of a lifetime, it was how adamant I was, at the age of ten, that I’d checked all the possibilities and accounted for everything that mattered.

I laughed out-loud, which didn’t endear me to the people ahead of me at the TSA checkpoint; one of the 21st Century’s iterations of the ‘Mark of Cain’ included laughing inappropriately in an airline terminal.

Ever since waking up next to Leanne, ok, soon after waking up… I had a feeling I was forgetting something terribly important.

On the second try to reach Hazel, I got a message, “Your call cannot be completed as dialed, there is no service in that location, idiot.”

Moving the phone towards my pocket, I heard, “Final Voice Mail” then Hazel’s voice, “Ian, if you see anyone with an odd mark on their hand, it’s a charagma; I’m trying to run down the old myth, might have someone here who can help, will call when you get to Chicago.”

 

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Well, what exactly do you want to know? Whether I am a clark or a scott or roger? If you have to ask, then you need to keep reading the Posts for two reasons: a)to get a clear enough understanding to be able to make the determination of which type I am and 2) to realize that by definition I am all three.* *which is true for you as well, all three...but mostly one

Comments

  1. Excellent scene (Howlin’ Wolf, perfect).

  2. phyllis says:

    Delightful how you tied the two stories together.
    I especially liked the childhood memory and the corresponding picture.
    Thank you.

  3. Frank Hubeny says:

    That charagma sounds ominous. Perhaps as ominous as the trouble he’s getting himself into with Leanne. Nicely told.

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      yeah, that word (charagma) found in a search for ‘The Mark of Cain’ or ‘the Endtimes’ thought you would enjoy it

  4. There’s always that one pesky something, isn’t there.

  5. Chris Hall says:

    Ooh an old myth (excellent), and should I go to Chicago, perhaps?
    Plus, Howlin’ Wolf – more than wonderful!

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      true on both counts…

      (if you do go watch out for ‘Big Red’ no matter what Wikipedia say, it, 333 South Wabash ism in fact the corporate offices of the Omni Corp (which a certain Ms Clarieaux happens to run)

  6. Misky says:

    Ah. A twist in the old tail … erm tale. Another excellent example of how to write a Six.

    ps: TSA — I am always impressed by their ability to wear self-possessed importance. Goes to show what a uniform does to a person.

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      thanks for the Post Prompt. The Everything Rule allows clarks and scotts to work as TSA rogers are born to the role

  7. Liz H-H says:

    Always beware of the mark of the beast, lest you be claimed by the wrong sort.

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      damn! almost got through all comments without a video clip
      but since you brought it up… lol (from one of my top three favorite movies)

  8. Excellent, great track too!