Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)
This is the Wakefield Doctrine’s contribution to the Six Sentence Story bloghop.
Hosted by Denise, it requires one qualifying characteristic: to be of precisely six sentences in length,
The other half of the conversation? Here
Prompt word:
PARCEL
It’s not true I decided to quit graduate school and start a private investigation agency because of the elevator in an Art Deco office building; at least not entirely.
I smiled at my reflection, expanding into multiple parallelograms as the interior gate closed, each floor mutely shouting a number as the car rose in the shaft.
Picking up a parcel on the floor in front of my office, I passed through the outer office where the green-shaded lamp on my secretary’s desk cast half-hearted shadows on the reception area; at the end of her second day, when I reminded her that I didn’t need a night light after hours, she laughed her best bedroom laugh and said, “I didn’t say it was for you, it’s been my experience that if you find yourself feeling alone, you might want to say a prayer of gratitude.”
I pushed the cardboard-and-Tyvek package onto the top of my desk, a room-temperature icebreaker plowing through the off-white manila folders, cresting right to the edge of the scarred oak surface; deciding that if I couldn’t be where (and with whom) I would like, then I would be with whom I was paid to, so after swiveling my chair to face the windows looking out on the nighttime city, picked up my phone.
“Hello. Yeah, I’m calling on account of Lou; but if you tell him, I’ll deny it and your Saville Row tailored suit won’t make a difference, at least not one that counts…
Can we talk?”
“It’s just that while he appreciates your accommodation in the matter of Miz Storme, he does tend to be somewhat protective to those close to him, hence my reaching out to you.”
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Read and learn. What I love about Six Sentence Stories. Your second sentence doesn’t require the word “elevator” in it as it’s clear from the description where he is.
Delightful third sentence, and “…she laughed her best bedroom laugh…”
Vivid scene with a teaser of a last sentence, Clark. But wait…there is the other half.
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Very nice imagery; thank you.
I like how you called Rosetta, “Miz”. Also, good advice from the secretary about a prayer of gratitude when alone.
metaphorical money in the damn bank is all that gratitude stuff is
lol
I can hear that lift creaking and grinding metal on metal and shuddering as it bumps its way upward … and you hardly even mentioned its existence. Very suave. Hey-ho! another half of the conversation? I’m off to listen in…
yeah based on an actual elevator… back in college days, though not perfect as it did not have an elevator operator… just get it, close the accordion inner gate and pull the level to the desired floor
It looks like we all want to keep her safe. She’s more special than I think she realizes.
ah ha! you’ve been channeling the fòtin-Telle
…reaching out then, good.
Plus I agree with Mimi, very much.
yeah