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Six Sentence Story -the Wakefield Doctrine- [“…of Heroes and the MisUnderstood” Part 1.5]

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This is the Wakefield Doctrine’s contribution to the Six Sentence Story bloghop

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Tom and I are writing a Serial Six Sentence Story: ‘…of Heroes and the MisUnderstood‘. (If you’re just starting, this link will provide the whole story.)

Previously in our story, (from Tom): ‘Details

Prompt word:

SLIDE

The passenger compartment of the helicopter was as noisy as an outboard motor in a bath tub as our vertical ascent ceased and began to slide into a more normal flight, seemingly to the north; to my right, Isla, my erstwhile captor/Plus-one, considerately settled a headset over my ears.

Opposite us were two seats, one vacant and the other occupied by a man in a suit that cost more than my car; gotta be honest, my first impression involved words like: basalt, predator and as-implacable-as-pancreatic-cancer; if the devil decided to visit Earth disguised as a professional wrestler, (with a major jones for men’s fashion), this guy’d be the perfect poster boy.

Leaning against Isla’s shoulder I started to ask something to the effect of, ‘Who’s the fireplug in the bespoke suit’, when I felt her slide to her right, as if trying to distance herself from me as she mouthed the words ‘open mic’.

The man, doing nothing to detract from his imitation of a heavily-sedated tiger, opened his eyes and, in voice that would be at home in one of those running-in-quicksand nightmares, said, “I am Constantin Szarbo, I am here to protect Cyrus St. Loreto’s interest in you.”

Call it instinct or my natural charm, but I immediately got thigh-on-thigh with my personal jailer and felt something of a pleasant bulge along my upper leg; while I’d normally smile modestly, I tilted back into a more erect posture and barely managed to not laugh out loud.

Isla, once she’d disarmed me on the ground, hadn’t bothered to take my cell phone, so my link to Rue remained very much alive; I felt an overwhelming wave of relief and a burst of optimism, but to cover myself, seeing a glint on his left wrist, I smiled at the high-fashion ogre, “Dude, love the watch, a Patek Philipe Complication, how appropriate is that?

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Well, what exactly do you want to know? Whether I am a clark or a scott or roger? If you have to ask, then you need to keep reading the Posts for two reasons: a)to get a clear enough understanding to be able to make the determination of which type I am and 2) to realize that by definition I am all three.* *which is true for you as well, all three...but mostly one

Comments

  1. Spira says:

    Movie quality, Dolby Atmos, Imax, and…

    https://youtu.be/vI7JDTlixb8?si=Vc9fhmziWLCG1xRF

  2. Cool as a freakin’ cuke….

  3. Reena Saxena says:

    Love your description of the man in the suit. Applies to so many people I detest.

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      thanks Reena
      that is one of the nicest things to say about a bad guy in a story

  4. Frank Hubeny says:

    Isla may have forgotten to take the cell phone for a reason. Then again, maybe not. Looking forward to find out how they get out of this mess.

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      I’m thinking along those lines as well, Frank. Despite the admittedly rough start to their relationship, there might be a positive resource hidden there

  5. Misky says:

    I adore the self-deprecating, dry wit in this Six. This series may turn out to be one those “guilty pleasures”… although I’ve never ascribed guilt to a good laugh.

  6. Chris Hall says:

    Fun, fun, fun!

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      cool, cool, cool*

      *Abed Nadir**
      ** character on one of the best of all cancelled shows, ‘Community’

  7. messymimi says:

    He reminds me of a marine – he’s plotting his escape and how to kill everyone around him while playing it cool.

  8. Gotta love Rocco. Heart of gold, smarter than he let’s on and an attitude that would serve us all to embrace.
    Constantin. The well dressed muscle. Got to worry just a tad when he shows up, lol
    Totally entertaining scene, Clark.

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      Constantin is Cyrus manifest in the world of the mundane.

      and a totally, sharp-dressed man!

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  1. […] Previously in our story: (from Tom): ‘Whitechapel‘ and (from us): ‘Slide‘ […]

  2. […] Previously in our story: (from Tom): ‘Whitechapel‘ and (from us): ‘Slide‘ […]