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Six Sentence Story -the Wakefield Doctrine- [an Ian Devereaux Six]

Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers).

This is the Doctrine’s contribution to the Six Sentence Story bloghop.

Hosted by Denise, governed by a single admonition to make the story six sentences (no more, no less) in length.

To get in the mood, aka get the backstory to this week’s Six, follow the link: …Previously on the Six Sentence Theatre.

This week’s prompt word:

GAME

“Stand aside, woman, ‘The Game’s afoot!'”

Diane Tierney, now back at her hostess station of the Bottom of the Sea Strip Club and Lounge laughed; it sounded like everything that humor conjoined with sexual tension can be and hardly ever is, joyous abandon with an undertone of the carnal.

I smiled, ‘Into the breach fair maiden…’ and immediately stumbled over my words as I exceeded the safe duration of eye contact with a woman who was, from our first encounter, at once intimidating while simultaneously supercharging my atavistic drive to protect her from danger, real or imagined.

“Dear Sir, your commingling of literary allusions makes my knees weak and fluttery,” Diane, had she been a character in an olden days romance novel, would gather adjectives like willowy, alabaster skin touched by a rose and eyes of a deep blue to be mistaken for violet; I found her intriguing.

“Far be it from me, Mr. Devereaux, to interrupt you in your mission, so, until next Mid-Week Lunchtime Special, I’ll see you your Conan Doyle/Shakespeare mashup and raise you a simple, heartfelt, D. H. Lawrence, ‘Give me the democracy of touch, the resurrection of the body.’

To my credit I not only did not walk into the glass outer door, I transformed my stumble off the sidewalk into a manly jeté as I crossed Weybosset Street headed towards the palisade of hand-drawn picket signs milling around in a clumsy oval.

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Well, what exactly do you want to know? Whether I am a clark or a scott or roger? If you have to ask, then you need to keep reading the Posts for two reasons: a)to get a clear enough understanding to be able to make the determination of which type I am and 2) to realize that by definition I am all three.* *which is true for you as well, all three...but mostly one

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  1. Misky says:

    Endlessly gentle and humorous.

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      Thank you, Misky

      (I enjoy writing for those two characters almost as much as I do for the Owner of the Bottom of the Sea, Lou Caesare)

  2. Phyllis says:

    Always fun to spend time at the bottom of the sea, thank you.

  3. Frank Hubeny says:

    Nice response from Diane: “Dear Sir, your commingling of literary allusions makes my knees weak and fluttery.”

  4. Bottom of the Sea Strip Club and Lounge.
    Nuff said.

  5. Illusively allusory, words elude me. But wait. What are those picketers picketing?

    • Spira says:

      “What do we want?”
      “Time Travel”
      “When do we want it?”
      “It’s Irrelevant ”
      😆

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      that’s a bunch who have decided to try and make Lou’s establishment a context for their efforts to convert the residents of the city to the True Path

      yeah, good luck with that

  6. messymimi says:

    It’s always, um, fascinating when these two match wits.

  7. Engaging scene. There’s a palpable chemistry between Ian and Diane and most enjoyable, if not educational, to eavesdrop on their repartee with one another. Diane is somewhat of a mystery.

  8. Spira says:

    D & D evokes Ava & Humphrey.

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      hey, I must’ve included you in a rant about the best time travel movie ever, right? Based on a Heinlein story (‘All you Zombies’) it simply is one of those movies where you’re sitting at the dinner table the next night and you look up and say, “Wait a minute… in ‘Predestination’ at the middle was that?!!!

  9. Chris Hall says:

    Fun, fun, fun! These two are great!