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Six Sentence Story -the Wakefield Doctrine- [a Café Six]

Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)

This is the Wakefield Doctrine’s contribution to the Six Sentence Story bloghop.

Hosted each week by Denise, all we’re asked to do is write a story of six (and only six) sentences.

Prompt word:

KICK

“On this we can agree.”

Despite being extremely expensive, the music system unexpectedly flared into pre-LED colored light, heralding the unmistakable plastic-flop of vinyl onto turntable; the 100 proof-silk sound of Curtis Mayfield began to confide raw truth of life for those on the left up-slope of the Bell curve.

“Not to be rude, but what, not counting your fanciful oeuvre hung on being a time traveler, encourages you to presume that?”

The Sophomore’s lips compressed into a non-committal line, even as his eyes skidded across the direct line-of-sight with the other man; the haplessly-optimistic part of his mind ran scratchy newsreels of manly hugs binding self-absorbed veterans returning from battle. Medals and campaign ribbons, official tokens of instant depreciation to be treasured only when alone, the better to survive the emotional kick of a lethal fetus awaiting entrance to a loud, noisy world, barely hinted at the true extent of his wounds.

The tall, thin man stared at the visitor on the far side of his desk when one of six phones skittered to life, a deaf-mute sand-crab demanding attention in a surprisingly arid world; swiping the screen into the cell phone equivalent of a coma, he looked at the Sophomore and rose from his chair.

 

 

 

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Well, what exactly do you want to know? Whether I am a clark or a scott or roger? If you have to ask, then you need to keep reading the Posts for two reasons: a)to get a clear enough understanding to be able to make the determination of which type I am and 2) to realize that by definition I am all three.* *which is true for you as well, all three...but mostly one

Comments

  1. phyllis says:

    I enjoyed accompanying the time travelers to the 70s – very enjoyable.
    Thank you.

  2. Frank Hubeny says:

    Being a time traveler must create a lot of opportunities for a “fanciful oeuvre”.

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      who doesn’t enjoy a good time travel story?*

      * I will now plug what may very well be the best time travel movie ever: ‘Predestination’ (with Ethan Hawke and based on a story by one of the masters of the genre, Robert Heinlein). If you’re ever in the mood for a story that will have you go, “Wait a darn minute! That movie last week, did they really…..?”

  3. messymimi says:

    On this we can agree, you write like nobody’s business.

  4. You can beat Curtis Mayfield, not even with a really big stick.

  5. Well, damn. That was supposed to read “You can’t beat Curtis Mayfield ……”
    I hate when that happens!

  6. Captivating, vivid, intense.

    “…one of six phones skittered to life, a deaf-mute sand-crab demanding attention in a surprisingly arid world…”
    Excellent last sentence, the above part in particular. One’s first inclination might be to ask “who was calling?” The literal and most obvious reaction.
    But no-o-o. I read it differently and talk about “alternate endings”, lol

  7. Good writing with outstanding metaphors!

  8. Chris Hall says:

    Happy listening with Curtis Mayfield and a few more vinyls too!

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