Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)
This is the Wakefield Doctrine’s contribution to the Six Sentence Story bloghop.
Hosted by Denise there is a single rule: Six sentences no more/no less
So, what’s this called, a Flashback? a Backstory? Don’t know. Don’t care. Best ‘Previously in our story… ‘ is This Link (and Lou’s line at the end).
Prompt word:
MELANCHOLY
“It’s either that or go to prison.”
The woman stood, as powerless to flee the voice as a butterfly, invisible minuten pin forcing her into spectator-class victim as her lifepath approached a fork unimaginable a mere twenty-four hours earlier.
“In either scenario, the child is staying here on the Vineyard with her father,” the woman, business suit and designer glasses as iconic as the faux-sophisticated interrogator in an old WW II movie, stepped back and leaned, very-out-of-character, against the marble countertop.
Kasia’s fingers clenched impotently as she turned her head to face the voice, the baby in her arms shielded by her body; the architect’s innovative use of LEDs to illuminate the kitchen created a one-time effect of casting a childless-silhouette tilted towards the door, open into the late-Summer night.
With the ironic appreciation that only a god, intent on assuring Himself his new creations would suffer for being such a disappointment, the future Rue DeNite heard the voice of her Abnormal Psych professor, all of week before, say, ‘The Approach/Avoidance conflict is surely the best of Man and the worst of Woman”.
“Just give my client, her father, your ….former fiancé, the child and you can return to your garret and write your, ‘A Millennial’s Guide to Melancholy’ or whatever it is you’re wasting your life on.”
I like the title of that book: “A Millennial’s Guide to Melancholy”. Hopefully it turns out to be a comedy. I like the backstory (or puzzle piece) illustrating Rue DeNite’s experience with negotiating. I wasn’t sure if she was Kasia or the one making the deal for the child’s father, but that which is left unknown is room for future stories to expand upon. Nice tale!
thanks Frank… Kasia is Rue’s real name. The attorney making the threats is un-named. (This is part of what I look for in Sixes, the feedback of the story… I wanted to provide the backstory, but having two female characters pushed my limits (and, I’ll blame Denise for limiting me to Six sentences)
lol
Such heartbreak would make one better able to write such a tome.
too true
Such a melancholy six. Thank you for giving her more depth.
“O, woe is me,
To have seen what I have seen, see what I see!”
thx
‘cellent quotationing yo
Excellent ink and choice of painting.
thankee, don Νίκος
And so she made a deal with the devil, our very own Lou. At least it wasn’t with Cyrus (St. Loreto) for then she would truly be damned!
I’m with Phyllis. Your Six provides a fly on the wall’s view of Kasia – determined mother with skills and talents she is only now discovering, albeit under extreme circumstances.
hell yeah
Cyrus would go all Keyser Söze on her (and still own her soul).
Lou might bust some things up or, whatever, but seeing how Rue already paid (by going down to Miami) she’d be free to keep dancing at the Bottom of the Sea or move back to the Vineyard*
*which actually would be an option, seeing how no one there is going to even think about messing with Kasia lol
‘Whatever it is’ a waste of her life? I think not.
agree, K