Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)
This is the Wakefield Doctrine’s contribution to the Six Sentence Story bloghop.
Hosted, once a week, by Denise, it is, as bloghop go, the essence of simplicity.
Employing the week’s prompt word, write a story consisting of six and only six sentences.
Pretty simple, isn’t it?
And …and! As a bonus, from most of the talented writers who participate, we are treated to small tales of wonder, tantalizing episodes of serial adventure and grab-your-sides funny stories. Of course, the Six Sentence Story bloghop being Freedom Hall, the Wakefield Doctrine is licensed to confound with Sixes such as the following.
This week’s prompt word:
BEAT
[Thuh…]
The name, William Blake, took up residence in the not-all-that metaphorical Green Room of the man’s early-morning mind; he let a smile push parts of his face into a pattern more habitual than congruent to his mood.
‘A little late now, don’t you think,’ The smile, as un-sustainable as are all willful lies, despite how practiced they may be, began to break down, like fractal clay banks of a river at the end of a flash flood; a life-time of habit coughed a laugh in a vain attempt to reshape his lips, the better to support his eyes.
[…Luh]
The world, long a puzzle of recalcitrant parts looking so simple, yet always resisting the effort to join together into a sensible whole, stopped moving around the man and an Arctic chill filled the space between his scalp and his skull, hair follicles contracted in a long-abandoned defense to make a being un-appetizing to any and all predators…
[ ].Between one beat of the heart and another, lies the most objective and concrete manifestations of ‘everything’; the sound of one extinguishes and the essential habit of mortality anticipates, if not hears, the next note of a song, the only one that has ever mattered.
“like fractal clay banks of a river at the end of a flash flood;”
Loved the descriptive line.
thanks, B
Nice description of that smile “as un-sustainable as are all willful lies”. Each note is the only one that matters until the next comes along.
I agree
Fractal is a good adjective to describe this six. Like hoping for a simple melody and being pleasantly surprised when you recognize Take Five playing in the background.
Thank you.
Better late than never. Or, as some prefer, better late than pregnant.
lol
Some days are like that, and then you go find a place to be alone, unmasked, and refreshed. I felt this.
Thank, Liz