Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)
This is the Doctrine’s contribution to the Six Sentence Story bloghop.
Hosted by Denise
(New Readers: this Six is a …segment(?) … installment(kinda)… chapter(nah) a part of what certain Sixarians in this weekly gathering are beginning to refer to as ‘Tales from the Six Sentence Café & Bistro‘ You may begin to see (other) Six Sentence Stories that seem to be taking place in the same setting, describe characters who are familiar. If there is a map, a Legend, if you will, to this evolving world, the Comments would be where I’d start. Just sayin’)
This being a continuation of last week’s Six, here’s a handy link, in case you didn’t read it.
This week’s prompt word:
ERUPTION
The tall, thin man looked over at the Sophomore, his index finger to his lips, eyebrows cursoring the young man’s attention towards the far side of the rooftop where the stairwell door was sighing closed behind the dark silhouette of the Proprietor known as the Raconteuse. Hair, like angry coals in a forge, rode her shoulders as she passed among the skylights, under stilted wooden water towers, her black robes dusting the inverted ‘J’ of beaten-metal air vents, to the base of an open staircase, the granulated crunch of her Eloise Bottas’ modulated into flattened, nearly-musical, bell tones as she ascended to the structure referred to as ‘the penthouse’.
“Ain’t no shame in letting the little subconscious alarm-bells get to you, kid,” the older man was now, somehow, at the edge of the roof as far from and in the opposite direction from where the Proprietor Chris disappeared.
The college student looked out and down at the enclosed bridge structure connecting the building housing the Six Sentence Café & Bistro to the adjacent mill, beneath which at least four horizontal rows of soot-glazed windows continued down to the alley, loading docks and alcoves.
Hoping to laugh off his mood, the Sophomore turned away from the post-industrial abyss only to come face-to-face with a sign, riveted to the brick wall of an additional stairwell; across the top: ‘Warning! Permitted Individuals Only!’ beneath that: ‘Rules Governing the Workpeople’ the list, long since obscured by the passing of seasons and time, except for the odd words: ‘the Overlookers’ (and) ‘The Masters’; what made him fear a four-alarm eruption of his battered subconscious was the slogan across the bottom of the Notice: ‘The Engine That Changed The World’.
The tall, thin man, sounding too far out over the alleyway to make any sense, laughed with restrained joviality, “I know, right?”
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That is an ominous sign he found. I wonder if the Overlookers are still over looking.
I used the term Overlookers because, as I googled old factories and textile mills, I came across a couple of photos of old signs that actually used that term. From England in the 19th century.
hope so! (new plot angle!!)
These Overlookers, Clark, to me, have a presence about them which will filter through into this world any second now… obviously, this world and time are all subject to change and don’t follow any particular order… but the Overlookers… I can sense them.
yeah, I like the concept (“Err. Mr. Proprietor, Senor Tom? Don’t you think the toy chest is pretty much full, maybe you might spend more time playing with them than trying to find new ones?”)
The toy chest… full… around here??? There’s always room for more! 😃😉
ok… (lol) meet us up on the roof, it’s only Friday we should have plenty of time of a post-repost?
You now have me running around in circles! 🤣
no circles intended, just a continuation off the Café Six (the tall,thin man and the Sophomore)
no rush, we’re just chillin to some tuneage*
for the Sophomore?**
** clue to his secret
You are still the master
ty PB
I enjoy any story that has the tall thin man in it.
Thank you.
Those alarm-bells often serve a very good purpose.
tru dat
Because dear friend…