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Six Sentence Story -the Wakefield Doctrine- (a Café Six)

Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)

This is the Doctrine’s contribution to the Six Sentence Story bloghop.

Hosted by Denise

(New Readers: this Six is a …segment(?) … installment(kinda)… chapter(nah) a part of what certain Sixarians in this weekly gathering are beginning to refer to as ‘Tales from the Six Sentence Café & Bistro‘ You may begin to see (other) Six Sentence Stories that seem to be taking place in the same setting, describe characters who are familiar. If there is a map, a Legend, if you will, to this evolving world, the Comments would be where I’d start. Just sayin’)

This being a continuation of last week’s Six, here’s a handy link, in case you didn’t read it.

This week’s prompt word:

ERUPTION

The tall, thin man looked over at the Sophomore, his index finger to his lips, eyebrows cursoring the young man’s attention towards the far side of the rooftop where the stairwell door was sighing closed behind the dark silhouette of the Proprietor known as the Raconteuse. Hair, like angry coals in a forge, rode her shoulders as she passed among the skylights, under stilted wooden water towers, her black robes dusting the inverted ‘J’ of beaten-metal air vents, to the base of an open staircase, the granulated crunch of her Eloise Bottas’ modulated into flattened, nearly-musical, bell tones as she ascended to the structure referred to as ‘the penthouse’.

“Ain’t no shame in letting the little subconscious alarm-bells get to you, kid,” the older man was now, somehow, at the edge of the roof as far from and in the opposite direction from where the Proprietor Chris disappeared.

The college student looked out and down at the enclosed bridge structure connecting the building housing the Six Sentence Café & Bistro to the adjacent mill, beneath which at least four horizontal rows of soot-glazed windows continued down to the alley, loading docks and alcoves.

Hoping to laugh off his mood, the Sophomore turned away from the post-industrial abyss only to come face-to-face with a sign, riveted to the brick wall of an additional stairwell; across the top: ‘Warning! Permitted Individuals Only!’ beneath that: ‘Rules Governing the Workpeople’ the list, long since obscured by the passing of seasons and time, except for the odd words: ‘the Overlookers’ (and) ‘The Masters’; what made him fear a four-alarm eruption of his battered subconscious was the slogan across the bottom of the Notice: ‘The Engine That Changed The World’.

The tall, thin man, sounding too far out over the alleyway to make any sense, laughed with restrained joviality, “I know, right?”

 

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Well, what exactly do you want to know? Whether I am a clark or a scott or roger? If you have to ask, then you need to keep reading the Posts for two reasons: a)to get a clear enough understanding to be able to make the determination of which type I am and 2) to realize that by definition I am all three.* *which is true for you as well, all three...but mostly one

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  1. Frank Hubeny says:

    That is an ominous sign he found. I wonder if the Overlookers are still over looking.

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      I used the term Overlookers because, as I googled old factories and textile mills, I came across a couple of photos of old signs that actually used that term. From England in the 19th century.

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      hope so! (new plot angle!!)

  2. Tom says:

    These Overlookers, Clark, to me, have a presence about them which will filter through into this world any second now… obviously, this world and time are all subject to change and don’t follow any particular order… but the Overlookers… I can sense them.

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      yeah, I like the concept (“Err. Mr. Proprietor, Senor Tom? Don’t you think the toy chest is pretty much full, maybe you might spend more time playing with them than trying to find new ones?”)

  3. UP says:

    You are still the master

  4. phyllis0711 says:

    I enjoy any story that has the tall thin man in it.
    Thank you.

  5. Those alarm-bells often serve a very good purpose.

  6. Spira says:

    Because dear friend…