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Pretty simple, isn’t it?
This week’s prompt word:
nEST
“You are capable of so much, it would be a sin to waste your talent.”
From above, a branch, really no more than a twig, breaks off and drifts toward the earth. The simplicity of a child makes all things possible but comes at a cost, lacking the ability to the distinguish between opinion and fact, they live at risk of damaging infection from well-meaning advice as any infectious germ or lethal virus.
“How can you do so well on the aptitude tests and bring home grades like this?”
One more twig or small broken branch, falls in a new forest and finds its decent halted by similar ideas and, linking, changes the world, a seemingly necessary adaptation shaping the host.
“Maybe they’re right,” even an obviously false certainty can survive, provided it finds a place in the soul to build a nest; the entangling of not-individually-damaging thoughts, immune to others of its kind begins to spread like a transparent cancer.
Childhood is a dangerous place.
Child-like adulthood is so much better.
I tend to agree
We, all of us, are subject to influences beyond our control and comprehension. From infancy through childhood, our “tablets” are being written upon. I suppose for some, adulthood is for searching and finding the eraser.
Thought evoking Six.
yeah, that fricken eraser! where the hell did I put it (not that I could imagine needing it at the time)
How i remember the well-meaning words that did so much more harm than good.
With you on that
The nests of life…as happenstance, influence and spirit come together for a great six!
Thank you!
A very sensitive story! Beautifully penned!
ty, Reena
So true, Clark.The soul can be such fertile soil, which is equally a blessing and a curse. So well written.
Good thing we were not so aware of that duality at the time.*
*speaking for myself, of course.
Reminds me of a few people I grew UP with. The path to adulthood can be a rocky one. Good six. YO!
Thanks, man
So sad, and yet true.
agree
Thought provoking and true. Being able to distinguish between opinion and fact can be a challenge long after childhood for many.
Thanks, Pat