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Six Sentence Story -the Wakefield Doctrine- [an Order of Lilith Six]

Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)

This is the Doctrine’s contribution to the Six Sentence Story bloghop.

Hosted by Denise, constrained by a sentence limit (high and low) of six, there are worse ways to spend the remaining time you have on earth.

Previously…

Prompt word:

VOW

It’s been said that all Great Romances, (and not a few tales of Reluctant Redemption), begin with a seemingly intractable conflict between two people.

While at least one of our two may be suspected of not being a normal person, (by virtue of culture, genetics or personal history), we would do well to keep in mind the legal concept of ‘jointly and severally’. Both are bound by a vow, to whoever (or whatever), and as a result have come to be where they are now.

Sister Aclima, member of the Order of Lilith, sat at one of the small number of tables arrayed under a claret awning along the E 82nd St sidewalk abutting Nectar, a Manhattan café and thought, “What in the Goddess’ name have I gotten myself into?”

Brother Seamus Lymphocytus, wearing clothing that, by standards of current fashion, would not be inappropriate most places, with the exception of: a surgical theatre, a court of law or the clean room in a microprocessor assembly line, mused, “The things I do to pay down the debt of my people.”

As impromptu angelus, a voice, “Are you two ready to order?”

 

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Well, what exactly do you want to know? Whether I am a clark or a scott or roger? If you have to ask, then you need to keep reading the Posts for two reasons: a)to get a clear enough understanding to be able to make the determination of which type I am and 2) to realize that by definition I am all three.* *which is true for you as well, all three...but mostly one

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  1. Frank Hubeny says:

    I found Nectar Cafe on Google Maps and used street view to look around. It is right where you said it should be. Nicely described. I can see that waiter (in my imagination, not on the map) coming to their table ready to take their order.

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      that (finding story locations in the ‘real’ world) is half the fun of writing for me…not sure why but I’ve spent hours going up and down streets in all sorts of places

  2. Misky says:

    A fine example of binding a reader’s imagination to a location through words.

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