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Six Sentence Story -the Wakefield Doctrine- [a Rosetta and the Sophomore Six]

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This is the Doctrine’s contribution to the Six Sentence Story bloghop.

Hosted by Denise, constrained by a sentence limit (high and low) of six, there are worse ways to spend the remaining time you have on earth.

Previously…

Prompt word:

ECHO

The car crossed the Brooklyn Bridge and was absorbed into the Manhattan transportation infrastructure like a rogue white cell; the system and the cell, bound by mortal purpose such that even the survivor would never be the same. Were this a melodrama, one might consider extending the metaphor to the two passengers, their relationship threatening to overcome the natural momentum of the plot.

“So, what, might I ask is your plan,” the Sophomore held his Zippo until the end of the driver’s cigarette glowed, he then lit his own before flicking the shiny-metal lighter shut; if floating labels did not run the risk of excess frivolity, his would be ‘Drama’ or for the more classically-inclined, ‘dharma’.

“Whaddya mean?” Rosetta Storme’s ‘floating designator’ would surely be ‘Melodrama’; that the risk of emotional echos between the two creating a deafening feedback loop, mores the narrative inertia, as we’re drawn along with the two young people.

The Sophomore looked over to Rosetta, a smile shouldering whatever lingering doubts he may have about the girl driving, “Did I ever tell you about how, in the early seventies there were demonstrations, for, just about everything and… and this is the part that should be of interest to both of us, the second wave of the feminist movement started, like, in the late sixties, early 70s.”

The young woman turned and, putting her right hand to the back of the essentially-younger man’s neck drew him into a kiss that not only lasted long enough to get through the last toll booth, but through the magic of Melodrama, convinced the automated machine to raise it’s pole and flash an unabashed green light, “Well, as far as my role in this adventure, I plan to find this nun, make her tell me where the time machine thingie is and keep it out of the hands of that woman my uncle hates….capische?”

 

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Comments

  1. First sentence? Yeah, that feels about right.
    You know, the Sophomore and Rosetta at first would seem to be total opposites, yet there’s an affinity there which makes them more… complimentary.
    Can’t help but wonder – what in the world does Rosetta plan to do/say to Sister Aclima when she finds her?
    Good scene!

  2. phyllis says:

    The music balanced the scene nicely.
    I remember you using a Zippo to light my cigarette – very sexy.
    Thank you

  3. Frank Hubeny says:

    I like how Rosetta didn’t have to pay the toll. She probably doesn’t need a time machine.

  4. Well, at least it’s a plan…

  5. Chris Hall says:

    Ah yes – ‘the second wave of the feminist movement’. I remember a particular book. ‘The Female Eunuch by Germaine Greer (1970). It was very important when I went to uni. It was very well thumbed then.

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      I remember her! (Weird the things that remain in the memory) quite the dynamic personality lol

  6. Capisched. Not sure that’a a word but you know what I mean!

  7. Misky says:

    Nice. Say what you might about Rosetta Storme, but I like her.