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Six Sentence Story -the Wakefield Doctrine- [an Ian Devereaux Six] ‘still at the IHOP, back in 1970’

Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)

This is the Wakefield Doctrine’s contribution to the Six Sentence Story bloghop.

Hosted by Denise and defined by a single number: 6 (the exact number of sentences in qualified stories)

Previously onan Ian Devereaux Six

Prompt Word:

RANK

‘Think, Devereaux’, my habitual self-admonition ranked right up there with, “Of course, just being friends would be great” in the category, ‘Change one thing about myself?’

“Alright, one hint and we move on,” the guy who’d started out pretty impressive, not gonna use the ‘intimidating’ word, but given my present circumstance, was looking like someone I’d better pay attention to, leaned over his maple syrup-drenched Cinn-A-Stack, “This is not a poorly-written sci-fi novel info dump where you retell the whole story because the Reader can’t remember that far back in the plot.”

His lip betrayed the friendly tone; the hint of a curl, of the low-life wife beater, proclaiming justification for his growing anger, “But, now that I think of tropes from this era,” he turned enough to linger on our waitress returning to the kitchen, “I could arrange for the wavy-wavy line transition, but given the risk of permanent brain damage, you might want to accept a simple, “Shut the hell up and I’ll tell you, ‘what the fuck is going on’.”

“I am part of an ancient organization charged with keeping mankind from destroying itself and rendering the world uninhabitable. You’ve come into contact with us before, when you helped your friend Dr. Leanne Thunberg search Europe for the cause of her husband’s death; your present client, a Mr. Lou Caesare, has you maintaining surveillance on a young woman by the name of Rosetta Storme, we need to know everything you know.”

Smiling with obvious enjoyment at the pile of pancakes and too-well-done bacon on his plate, he looked me in the eye, “If this was one of your culture’s even older memes, I’d be twisting the ends of a comically-long mustache and saying, “Or else.”

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Well, what exactly do you want to know? Whether I am a clark or a scott or roger? If you have to ask, then you need to keep reading the Posts for two reasons: a)to get a clear enough understanding to be able to make the determination of which type I am and 2) to realize that by definition I am all three.* *which is true for you as well, all three...but mostly one

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  1. Spira says:
  2. Frank Hubeny says:

    Nice description of the threat at the end with reference to twisting a moustache. The “maple syrup-drenched Cinn-A-Stack” would make me smile with enjoyment as well at least until I finished eating it.

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      thanks Frank (don’t tell anyone, but I had to look up favorite menu items at the IHOP because a) I haven’t been to one in a very long time and 2)I like as much authenticity as possible when I invoke the ‘real’ world in my stories

  3. Somehow I think this tells us more than it tells your protagonist, and I hope they enjoy the meal anyway.

  4. Chris Hall says:

    Ooh, pancakes again! But also, I remember certain things in the past. Getting clearer…

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      back in college days, if you’re like me… lol last year foggy but some nights in school…crystal clear

  5. A lot to unpack in this scene. Is it bad I like the “mean” time traveler of the ancient secret organization, lol And what could be the connection between the organization and Rosetta?
    No way in hell I should remember…Snidely Whiplash 🤣

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