Six Sentence Story -the Wakefield Doctrine-

Welcome to the Wakefield Doctrine (the theory of clarks, scotts and rogers)

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Ok. here I am at Wednesday Night. I have the ‘story’, but I’ve come to believe that I shouldn’t bet on what I hit publish on, at least until Thursday morning. For the moment I have what I consider to be the most fun ‘story’ I can come up with…at least for a Wednesday night.
Which, by the way, if you’re just joining us for the first time, this is zoe’s Six Sentence Story. It’s a bloghop that challenges us to write a story of six (and only six) sentences …the prompt word for this week is ‘suspect’.

 

“Who do you suspect?” I asked, hoping the cigarette smoke would mask the expression of doubt that I suspected was beginning to show on my face.

“Why the suspect, of course!” Try as she might, her face betrayed a certain suspicion of my interest.

“I knew that, however, your logic is rather suspect,” I smiled and pulled the blankets over my head, blocking out the cheery sunlight, totally covering my face, more than anything else, I didn’t want her to suspect.

“Well, for a minute there, I was doubting your confidence in me,” I suspected she would say that and pulled the revolver from under my pillow.

 

 

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Well, what exactly do you want to know? Whether I am a clark or a scott or roger? If you have to ask, then you need to keep reading the Posts for two reasons: a)to get a clear enough understanding to be able to make the determination of which type I am and 2) to realize that by definition I am all three.* *which is true for you as well, all three...but mostly one

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  1. UP says:

    Again, keep going…

  2. lesliesholly says:

    Love the many uses of the prompt word and the surprise ending, which I did not suspect!

  3. ivywalker says:

    TWIST!!!!!!

  4. messymimi says:

    Never go in without backup. Well done!

  5. oldegg says:

    Typical married couple then?

  6. valj2750 says:

    How could you want to shoot someone with whom you had such clever repartee?

    • clarkscottroger clarkscottroger says:

      …with a cigarette dangling from your lips, an arched eyebrow and (slightly) sardonic smile?

  7. luckyjc007 says:

    You surprised me! I really did not suspect it would have a twist! I think they deserve each other.

  8. Cynthia says:

    You are great with the “serial” stories. Nice! I think it’s your inner-scott making an appearance. In the literary form, of course. :)

  9. qwietpleez says:

    Good one, I suspected nothing less 😊